Black dragon of hate _ High School DXD Fanfic

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Tchao707

Bro use the proper fucking term for chess like queen knight rook bishop pawn not this fucking nonsense of jumper or tower you sound like a fucking 5 year who doesn't know the **** chess suck a fucking turn off on a other wise good fic

Release more

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AyushKumar199855

Hi, author the story is very good but I think you need a proof reader and an editor for it as I have seen many mistakes. If you need it contact me by my e mail at ayushkumar199855@gmail.com.

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GGMissFortune

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Nice start off

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Ryan_Nguyen_4639

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Christ_Apostle

Trash grammar......... cringe cringe cringe cringe cringe cringe cringe cringe cringe cringe cringe cringe cringe cringe cringe cringe cringe cringe cringe cringe cringe cringe cringe cringe cringe cringe cringe

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Seraph

You won't drop this right? ? 😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😮😮😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢

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MannyTheManticore

the story over all is okay it's just not only is the grammar actually giving me a headache and some of the words used should be replaced with words that makes sense in the context in certain sentences it's like you typed it with autocorrect turned on and everybody knows how that thing does not work

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Ryan_Nguyen_4639

Dont drop

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Ryan_Nguyen_4639

Cool

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Shallow_vernal

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Henrique_Paiao

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