/ Fantasy / Born With a Unique Skill
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Brady son of a Farmer and a tailor is on his road to becoming powerful with a unique skill that is, but this world is just a low grade one so he has to move on to other worlds to become more powerful
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Brady's Father is Farmer, mother is tailor. Everyone get a job, when age get 16. everone want warior for get more money and ofcorse skills and starts. He ged Bloddywarior and walk on his road to becoming powerful with a unique skill that is, but this world is just a low grade one so he has to move on to other worlds to become more powerful. I like story he can use a few more side caracters. Unfortunatly last 2 month no chapter. Still waitiong for new chapters. For read cultuvating mad man!? (:
I get very confused by the character, the story is too much fast paced. And there is nothing about anything than the levels, no plot twists, no nothing. But the most annoying is that the author stops explaining about the abilities or the abilities are not well explained at all.
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- 1 Chap 1: Skill Blood Merger 5 years ago
- 2 Chap 2: Blood Merger is Op 5 years ago
- 3 Chap 3: Viridian City 5 years ago
- 4 Chapter 4: Slowly Getting More Powerful 5 years ago
- 5 Chap 5: First Breakthrough 5 years ago
- 6 Chap 6 buying skill books 5 years ago
- 7 Chap 7: Equipment Renewal 5 years ago
- 8 Chap 8: Althidon the capital 5 years ago
- 9 Chap 9: Million Steps Forest 5 years ago
- 10 Chap 10: Library and Dungeon and Repeat 5 years ago
- 11 Chap 11: Raiding The Enemy Dragon Base 5 years ago
- 12 Chap 12: Killing Frenzy 5 years ago
- 13 Chap 13: Unmovable Waterfall 5 years ago
- 14 Chap 14: This is on a Whole Different Level 5 years ago
- 15 Chap 15: Dungeons are Pretty Much the Same 5 years ago
- 16 Chap 16: Made Money to Spend it Few Minutes Later 5 years ago
- 17 Chap 17: Virtual World Game’s 5 years ago
Writing Quality: 3, it's not absolutely atrocious. There are some misspellings, grammar, and punctuations ( where are your commas and periods! 😭 R.I.P commas and periods.) Stability of updates: 5, it's good so far. Story development: 3, it’s moving a little too fast. Character development: 0, there is none.😕 World development: 1, it needs to be expanded on. Overall this isn't a story this is a journal, each chapter is a summary of what the mc did that day/week/ month, which is not good; the real issue is the lack of character development it's preventing this from becoming a story. Also, expand on the world the mc lives in, you’ve given us some things like getting a system when one turns 16, and ways to level up, now give us more information about the world. Working on these two would raise the quality of this from a ’journal’ to a ’decent story.’ Hope this review helps! 👍🏾
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