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Review at chp 11 Looks like the original author is a fan of cultivation novels. And he decided to incorporate all the cool looking but terrible troupes in the fic. Love the humor and the dialogues in the fic. Unfortunately, most other characters are made to be evil/weak willed and just pathetic. Asuma is shown as the typical Young Master from those novels. While the Konoha's leadership is shown to be evil who would fall to any level to kill the MC while still trying to maintain their image in the eye of the public like a typical Righteous path power from the novels. Can be a fun read if you never read a cultivation novel before. Unfortunately, if you already have read many, then you won't like it.
The story is great. Annoyingly enough I have to write more here, because obviously being able to give a score without a review is too much to ask.
very very good, but did you abandon the story? .................................................................................................
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Not a fan of these type of fics unless its once in a awhile because of the cliche, cringe, cough blood, etc. The dialogue and thought process is just cultivation fics/stories but its in the naruto fic so its kinda entertaining
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I love the story so much and I hope that the author dose not drop the story and keeps it going in the same quality as it is now and I can't wate till the next chapter comes out
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"What Third Hokage didn’t know was that Nàiluò activated the God-level Chakra system." ...........................................................
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absolutely brilliant!!!!! I would put this story at chap 59 in the top 2 naruto fan fics i have seen and read. u will miss out if u do not read. mc is strong and use lots of brain cells. the power system in the fights is in top 2 i seen for naruto. while also being huyga clan that has really potential to stand just behind the mc.
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Mostly just bashing fic against the hokage, danzo and both their clans. Other than that the author keeps jerking off the mc by making everyone way dumber and everything always being seen through by the mc. The story is also filled CN tropes and vibes, you could change the names of characters and places to some chinese names, and you would not be able to tell that it was a Naruto fanfic. Mc is a Hyuuga, but mostly uses ninjutsu and a sword to fight. The writing is mostly easy to read, though there are some mistakes. Nothing that makes it unreadable.
🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥The character design and development is very good. Author-san has done a very good job. 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
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I don't know how it got so many 5 star reviews, because it isn't worth it. Story by itself is 3/5, not considering that translation seems to be more like mtl with a bit of editing done by hand. Which should drop it to 2.5/5 or 2/5. I didn't come here to read mtl.
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Very enjoyable to read. Story development is interesting and its good that Hiruzen in this fic is not some good, kind gradpa(seriously tired of this in Naruto fanfics). The only downside is the fact that there is only one chapter per day.
I like the mc's looks and how he handles situations. The grammer is good and I like his interactions with others, You should definitely give this story a chance (๑˃ᴗ˂)ﻭ
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I wanted to destroy that old Hokage. I mean he is sacrificing his allies for the village. Not to mention I like the actions of MC to destroy the actions of stu[pid hokage.
this one of the most unique Naruto fanfic i like it a lot.please continue to update the chapter.
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Review at chp 11 Looks like the original author is a fan of cultivation novels. And he decided to incorporate all the cool looking but terrible troupes in the fic. Love the humor and the dialogues in the fic. Unfortunately, most other characters are made to be evil/weak willed and just pathetic. Asuma is shown as the typical Young Master from those novels. While the Konoha's leadership is shown to be evil who would fall to any level to kill the MC while still trying to maintain their image in the eye of the public like a typical Righteous path power from the novels. Can be a fun read if you never read a cultivation novel before. Unfortunately, if you already have read many, then you won't like it.
The story is great. Annoyingly enough I have to write more here, because obviously being able to give a score without a review is too much to ask.
very very good, but did you abandon the story? .................................................................................................
Спасибо хахахахаххаааххахахахахахахаххахпхахахахахахахаххахахаххахахаххахахахахахаххахахпхаххахпхахахахаххахпхпхпхпхпхпххаххахах
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Not a fan of these type of fics unless its once in a awhile because of the cliche, cringe, cough blood, etc. The dialogue and thought process is just cultivation fics/stories but its in the naruto fic so its kinda entertaining
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I love the story so much and I hope that the author dose not drop the story and keeps it going in the same quality as it is now and I can't wate till the next chapter comes out
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"What Third Hokage didn’t know was that Nàiluò activated the God-level Chakra system." ...........................................................
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absolutely brilliant!!!!! I would put this story at chap 59 in the top 2 naruto fan fics i have seen and read. u will miss out if u do not read. mc is strong and use lots of brain cells. the power system in the fights is in top 2 i seen for naruto. while also being huyga clan that has really potential to stand just behind the mc.
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Mostly just bashing fic against the hokage, danzo and both their clans. Other than that the author keeps jerking off the mc by making everyone way dumber and everything always being seen through by the mc. The story is also filled CN tropes and vibes, you could change the names of characters and places to some chinese names, and you would not be able to tell that it was a Naruto fanfic. Mc is a Hyuuga, but mostly uses ninjutsu and a sword to fight. The writing is mostly easy to read, though there are some mistakes. Nothing that makes it unreadable.
🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥The character design and development is very good. Author-san has done a very good job. 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
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I don't know how it got so many 5 star reviews, because it isn't worth it. Story by itself is 3/5, not considering that translation seems to be more like mtl with a bit of editing done by hand. Which should drop it to 2.5/5 or 2/5. I didn't come here to read mtl.
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Very enjoyable to read. Story development is interesting and its good that Hiruzen in this fic is not some good, kind gradpa(seriously tired of this in Naruto fanfics). The only downside is the fact that there is only one chapter per day.
I like the mc's looks and how he handles situations. The grammer is good and I like his interactions with others, You should definitely give this story a chance (๑˃ᴗ˂)ﻭ
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I wanted to destroy that old Hokage. I mean he is sacrificing his allies for the village. Not to mention I like the actions of MC to destroy the actions of stu[pid hokage.
this one of the most unique Naruto fanfic i like it a lot.please continue to update the chapter.