3評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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gusto ko magpasamat sa mga nagbabasa. sana mag-iwan din kayo ng comment or review para mas mapahusay ko pa ang pagsusulat ko. nag-iisip ako ng mga bagong nakakatakot na kwento. minsan base sa sarili kong experience. well, madalas ko kasi takotin ang sarili ko. hehe!
I've read 1 chapter its ok at first but you loose to absorb more but the story is good. It needs more impact and suspense for the readers to read more chapters of it. Great works by the way hope you can improve the storylines at it goes along. Rate it at around 2.8 for the meantime might increase if there will be improvements in the future releases...
salamat sa nagbabasa god bless us all! hope na nag-eenjoy kayo gaya ng enjoyment na nararamdaman ko while writing this story. salamat ulit! sana mabasa ninyo rin iba kong story and free po kayong magcomment para alam ko feedback ninyo. 😊
gusto ko magpasamat sa mga nagbabasa. sana mag-iwan din kayo ng comment or review para mas mapahusay ko pa ang pagsusulat ko. nag-iisip ako ng mga bagong nakakatakot na kwento. minsan base sa sarili kong experience. well, madalas ko kasi takotin ang sarili ko. hehe!
I've read 1 chapter its ok at first but you loose to absorb more but the story is good. It needs more impact and suspense for the readers to read more chapters of it. Great works by the way hope you can improve the storylines at it goes along. Rate it at around 2.8 for the meantime might increase if there will be improvements in the future releases...
salamat sa nagbabasa god bless us all! hope na nag-eenjoy kayo gaya ng enjoyment na nararamdaman ko while writing this story. salamat ulit! sana mabasa ninyo rin iba kong story and free po kayong magcomment para alam ko feedback ninyo. 😊