摘要
A fat blo- I mean a healthy young man decided to embark on an adventure playing the new game that came out, Aglenem. Using the games key feature, he gains the [Forte: Fatso]. How will his adventure turn out?
[RELEASE DATES]
1CH- Every 3 days
<OR>
2Ch- Every Week
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I really like the Story developement so far, it is well written and I recommend it to everyone who likes Stories with level and game elements.
When Young Justice reccommended this novel to me I can say I was intrigued, but hesitant. It wasn't until Oliver stepped in-game that Deevi was successful in sucking me in. I am now loving how this story is delevoping! Excited for more!! Minor typos, but nothing major that kicks me out of the story.
As a fellow author on webnovel, I must say this story is FANTASTIC. No story is truly perfect and us authors do have lives outside of writing so the slower chapter release is very understandable. Even though my inner self is screaming for more, this one is worth waiting for the chapters to update. Keep up the great work Deevi! And good luck with collage things!
good novel, a couple of grammar mistakes but nothing that stops the fun of reading this fun novel, has an amazing idea ans good world building and character building, i recommend reading it
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卷 1
- 1 Aglenem 5 years ago
- 2 Competition 5 years ago
- 3 [Forte: Fatso] 5 years ago
- 4 First Quest 5 years ago
- 5 Snowflake Forest 5 years ago
- 6 Icicle Rabbits 5 years ago
- 7 Second Death 5 years ago
- 8 More People? 5 years ago
- 9 Off to Mining! 5 years ago
- 10 Into The Mines 5 years ago
- 11 Training 5 years ago
- 12 Training pt. 2 5 years ago
- 13 Ice Iron 5 years ago
- 14 The Grind 5 years ago
I Love this story! I should use one more word to explain it. AMAZING! Author Keep up the good work and take the time you need! I'll be waiting patiently for more! This review was left by 'your biggest fan'. (Self Proclaimed) YoungJustice.