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Writing level is very basic, mostly back and forth dialog. Story progression and the dialog are nonsensical; the logic behind what is being said doesn't make sense. Also, it looks like the story has been abandoned.
it's a good novel so far but i can't give it a higher rating without getting more chapters to read and thus help me decide ...................................................................................................................................................................
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Solid dialogue characters interesting story concepts and one of my personal favorites town building/ empire building very satisfying to read and nice mystery and drama with the gender bent thing looking forward to how the book turns out
I want to give it five star but right now it only in the beginning so I would give it 4.2 Right now the development is very good Keep on the hard work
I will be answering questions here, but here are a few facts about the novel. My goal is to write three chapters a week for this novel. Things you won't find. 1. People with no motives. 2. Low IQ 3. OP MC Stuff you will find, 1. Readable novel. 2. People with strong motives. 3. Few cliches/ people that go beyond the cliches.
Writing level is very basic, mostly back and forth dialog. Story progression and the dialog are nonsensical; the logic behind what is being said doesn't make sense. Also, it looks like the story has been abandoned.
it's a good novel so far but i can't give it a higher rating without getting more chapters to read and thus help me decide ...................................................................................................................................................................
Holaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Solid dialogue characters interesting story concepts and one of my personal favorites town building/ empire building very satisfying to read and nice mystery and drama with the gender bent thing looking forward to how the book turns out
I want to give it five star but right now it only in the beginning so I would give it 4.2 Right now the development is very good Keep on the hard work
I will be answering questions here, but here are a few facts about the novel. My goal is to write three chapters a week for this novel. Things you won't find. 1. People with no motives. 2. Low IQ 3. OP MC Stuff you will find, 1. Readable novel. 2. People with strong motives. 3. Few cliches/ people that go beyond the cliches.