摘要
The dawn of Emotion Based A.I.s is here, John is the fifth test subject to have an AI implemented in his brain, and so far the first one to survive.
Blinded by the dream of immortality, the researchers push the tests to inhumane standards. John is obligated to take part in sessions of torture designed to test the limits of the AI influence over the physical and mental health. What was supposed to be a new beginning in life turns into living hell.
An (un)lucky twist ends his life. John then reincarnates with his AI in a new world where a System influences the interaction between Magic and Matter. With seemingly limitless potential and a game-like system influencing the world, the hero sets on his journey.
--AUTHOR NOTE, PLEASE READ--
I will state here my promises to you, potential reader:
1. No harem! I don't trust myself to make a harem feel natural or healthy, I never met any person who has a personality that can adapt and live in a harem for reasons that are not monetary, so I can't draw inspiration from real life. Sorry!;
2. The enemies will not be bland and illogically mean. Some may feel like that at first, but I will take great care in fleshing them out, trust me. You may end up hating some, but you won't be able to deny that they had their reasons for what they did;
3. I am using a paid (and expensive) automated editor tool, and I take longer to write because I take my time in editing the stuff I write. I am aiming to improve and I will not shy away from constructive criticism, nor take offense for no reason;
4. Characters will die and will suffer, some will get over the tragedies and improve, others will not be as resilient.
5. This novel has a lot of ground to cover, it is neither a short story, a manual on crafting, or the script of some action scene. There will be both time skips and oversimplifications of some actions for the sake of moving the story forward. Time skips will be more prominent in the first 30 chapters. I will describe crafting processes and fights with more detail if they are essential for the chapter;
6. If I took my time describing something, it's because it is important. I hate novels that wastes time describing useless stuff. If you skim over something, the chances are that something in the future will not make sense. I am an adept of "Chekhov's gun" principle;
7. If in the future Webnovel comes to offer me a contract, I will first reach for the readers to know their opinion and see if they want to donate through other sites or not. It would be a dream come true to live of writing, but not if the cost is the alienation from the people that supported me along the way;
8. I already have 31k words on my auxiliary documents, I have a plan for the story, and I will not be making changes even if someone ends up noticing some foreshadowing and figures out what will happen. The story comes first.
9. I have a wife, a job that demands 9h every day and courses related to my job (lawyer) three days of the week, it's unlikely that I will be able to do mass releases at all. I will have a healthy amount of chapters to be able to post at least 1 chapter every day continually. Don't worry.
10. I will read all the comments. I will listen to all you have to say and will try my best to accommodate demands as long as they do not hamper the path I prepared.
11. There is an arc that spans the entire novel. Each volume will be an arc in itself while progressing a little bit of the main arc. Every arc will have one or more main antagonists.
I think that's it! Thank you for reading it all. Have an awesome time reading my first novel!!
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I am rating it 5 stars for now but this novel is still too knew to be rated on things like stability of updating and character design. Overral it shows promise, the author seems to be prioritizing Worldbuilding for now, which is a good thing, many novels skip that part and start to pull deus ex all the times the Mc is in trouble. If quality drops, then I will change my review.
Read it on royalroadl, jumped over to webnovel and I must say it's a terrific book with great grammar, story quality is decent and amazing for a first start as the author has room to improve. Very satisfied!
Gostaria de dizer que estou aqui para apoiar o autor a continuar com essa obra , continue assim e não desista do livro ! Todos cometemos erros e boa sorte em sua jornada .
It's a good story. I especially like the main character and how the AI interacts with him. Though I feel that he should have more interactions with her.
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This is so amazing! sadly there's no update anymore.... still waiting.. 🙏 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . WHYYYYY!!!! 😭🙏🙏🙏🙏
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The best story I have read in a while and I have read a lot of stories. So author where can I find the rest of the story??? I am seriously in love with this story as the way it was written to the story development is amazing. I just hope there were other chapters.
Needs more updates though. And more details to some characters though like Eleanore. Can’t expect her to just go all motherly out of nowhere when **** hits the fan. Overall really good. Would love to see the revenge plots for this novel continue.
It's quite a good story. I have to admit I quite like how the story is going. There is proper development and the character doesn't just automatically know everything from the start but learn it bit by bit. There is no sudden huge info dumps which is good too. But the author hasn't posted in over a month, pls do it soon ;~;
This story has gotten me quite hooked, I really enjoy the more realistic themes to it compared to most Isekai-style stories, and the explanation about his abilities. I just hope that it will continue and finish, I would hate to see it get dropped after getting this far and doing so good.
The story is so good. The emotional parts hit so hard and the thrill of plot is just so good. Highly recommend anyone to give it a try and you will be immediately hooked.
Read the author's notes! He does EXACTLY what he says for his story. As long as you can accept this I guarantee you will enjoy the writing.
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Wonderful book! It’s refreshing to read and the world building/development of the characters really pulls you in! After reading the last chapter, I sat there day dreaming about the trios future... is that weird? Maybe... but, I can’t wait for them to step up and out. I would recommend this book for people who enjoy seeing (almost) step by step a characters progression. So far it’s definitely not one of those “gets a system; two days later, kills god” Kudos to the author! I know it’s hard to write. Especially if it’s a slow paced book, with details. Keep up the good work and thank you for sharing!
This is the best like it makes my blood boil when reading the excitement ment it gives me is amazing............. . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . ..... . . . . . . . . . . .
卷 1 : Intro
- 1 The Arrival - Part 1 5 years ago
- 2 The Arrival - Part 2 5 years ago
- 3 Riwall Madec - Part 1 5 years ago
- 4 Riwall Madec - Part 2 5 years ago
- 5 Infancy - Part 1 5 years ago
- 6 Infancy - Part 2 5 years ago
- 7 Toddler 5 years ago
- 8 SS+ Potential? 5 years ago
- 9 The Castle and the Trio 5 years ago
- 10 First Training 5 years ago
- 11 Friday's Library of Heaven's Path? 5 years ago
- 12 Commander Eleanor Farsteel 5 years ago
- 13 A Boon Disguised as Torture? 5 years ago
- 14 Life Oath 5 years ago
- 15 The Fourth Wave 5 years ago
- 16 Smithing 5 years ago
- 17 Woodworking 5 years ago
- 18 The Dragon-Slayer 5 years ago
- 19 What. Is. The. System? 5 years ago
- 20 The Answer! 5 years ago
- 21 You Are Just a kid! 5 years ago
- 22 Infusing 5 years ago
- 23 Limits? 5 years ago
- 24 Novel Status Update! Good News! 5 years ago
- 25 Wrapping Up - Part 1 5 years ago
- 26 Wrapping Up - Part 2 5 years ago
- 27 Wrapping Up - Part 3/3 5 years ago
- 28 Tournament 5 years ago
- 29 Broken Promises 5 years ago
- 30 Where is my EXP? 5 years ago
- 31 Chapter 30: Live and Remember 4 years ago
First of all.... Second of all.... Third of all.... Ok......................................... Why is the prologue so long? This is my honest criticism. Take it with a grain of salt. Thanks author, I will read the book. Ok I give up, I still can’t post my review after 285 words..... Now I can??!!!!................... not yet. Oh. I forget to rate.