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it's good i think but if you want to attract more people from reading this you should change the cover, the current cover is off putting to be honest.
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The first chapters were simply good, the story was great, the balance of power, the hero was ruthless and scheming, but I dropped him in chapter 25, simply a terrible mistake, this king revealed his great secret of being so easily incarnated (I doubt how he managed to survive with such stupidity) And by the legendary coincidence that he is the friend of the dear, sincere hero, whom he knows only from the game, and the hero easily disclosed his secret and all his secrets to this person who only knows him through the game. Is that the main character began to include the indigenous people of this world, to his loyal soldiers of the game, so that the absurd and stupid things will appear a lot because of this merger, especially the actions of the hero so that it becomes like the rest of the trivial Chinese characters,
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it's good i think but if you want to attract more people from reading this you should change the cover, the current cover is off putting to be honest.
more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
The first chapters were simply good, the story was great, the balance of power, the hero was ruthless and scheming, but I dropped him in chapter 25, simply a terrible mistake, this king revealed his great secret of being so easily incarnated (I doubt how he managed to survive with such stupidity) And by the legendary coincidence that he is the friend of the dear, sincere hero, whom he knows only from the game, and the hero easily disclosed his secret and all his secrets to this person who only knows him through the game. Is that the main character began to include the indigenous people of this world, to his loyal soldiers of the game, so that the absurd and stupid things will appear a lot because of this merger, especially the actions of the hero so that it becomes like the rest of the trivial Chinese characters,