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摘要
Jaune Arc's scroll pings one day while he was playing a game on it. A new app had shown up from nowhere.
At first Jaune believed that his scroll had been hacked but soon he realized that the App, the Empyrean App was far more than it seemed at face value.
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The story is great and the writing and definitely much better than a bunch of other stuff on this site. Really recommend this if you love RWBY and Jaune Arc
Truly amazing so far, and one of my favorite characters gets a cool system that's a little different than your standard stat sheet and actually gives him cool abilities and hopefully his semblance can be used as a cultivation technique somehow.
For the moment this novel has like 3 ch. But i have to say that this have one of the best starts of a RWBY 's fanmade novel...................................
Ill rework the review but wanted to make this so it can get more attention it deserves! It's RWBy and I love these novels due to JNPR team and Author useing Jaune of Arc as his MC... If you can make him great and saves alot of life it his book been good den! Wish to read more and enjoy it near future
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I really want this to continue. this is exactly what I have been looking for, the only issue I have with this is that his system can be stolen. please continue writing.