/ Magical Realism / Having a Group Chat with the Gods
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Gods and Goddesses who made grave sin and unforgettable mistakes where sent down to Earth for punishment.
One day, Link Zamora was added into a magical group chat with the phone which was meant for his ungrateful girlfriend. He discovered that this group chat was not the exact same thing as his mind was thinking.
With the help of the Gods and Goddesses, Link will become the strongest person in the world, but a condition will be made.
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Only 4 chapters so far, but the story is interesting. You made couple of mistakes in each chapter, but I still understood what you wanted to portray. Your writing is a bit rough now, but you will improve with time. If you are willing to improve of course. The story reminds me of Percy Jackson movies. Where he was a son of Poseidon. There was also popular novel called cultivation chat group I believe. This should be based on it, although I don't know because I didn't read it. You have a solid story, just make sure to check those chapters a few times before publishing. I will add another thing. Be patient, when you have more chaps , readers will naturally stay, as long as you produce quality. Stay strong and keep up the good work.
This is an awesome story!!!!!!!! I hope the author is still working on this novel. I would like to see more of what will happen to the characters
Good...stories...i really love this.... The way of your english was awesome... I can learn something from this stories ....it was so interesting...
This is Brandon gould, I enjoyed this book and I cant wait to see where the Author will take this story. I would like to know a little more about the characters in depth I would not mind if you updated more chapters and added more detail to the world
The introduction is really good. The characters are still in the early stages, can't truly judge them but so far good so far. The world building is great, the quality of your writing is good and the story line is moving smoothly. I commend your effort. The burden on this novel is enormous if you understand where I'm going. But, I will be here supporting you.