Prime Originator

LV 15

Pointbreak

Hello you, yes, you, the lost and curious reader. I see you have stumbled upon my unholy sanctuary in search of something fun and interesting to read. I cannot say the early chapters are my best work, but it is my first book so do give it a try if you are willing to give this book a chance and allow me to entertain you.

LV 15

StarlightGhoul

As I stated in one of the chapters. This is by far is one of my top ten favorite books. Keep up the good work Author. I am in love with this novel!! 😊😊😁

LV 13

pataran

Mediocre writing, OK premise, 5 harem members by chapter 30, write your bad smut elsewhere, extremely disappointed. Why ruin a story with so many harem members?

LV 4

Darkshadow12

One of the good books I have read that has a good plot and some quality writing. Author has managed to create characters which seems to be pretty good. The plot gets interesting the more you read. The harem members are have different personalities whi is one of the most important factor. This novel has a good future if the author continues with the same quality of chapters.

LV 5

Comrade_Weismann

Great work fellow daoist. As a fellow aithor I am really impressed with the ability of the author to write. There is a good balance in thia story, not too sweet, not too dark. I also like the MC's personality, who likes women but is not a spineless man who gets led around by a woman just because she is pretty. Over all I wish the updates keep coming, and i quote : Just like BooBs, may thay be everpresent and plenty!

LV 6

3KBytes

I really don't feel like reading this story further. The mc is not likeable, story is full of cliches, and everything goes towards a completely obvious path, so no suspense on this story at all.

LV 4

Killerarrow007

It's easily predicted and he got too comfy around and what about his father revenge he is not at all brooding and story is good but on the way it was beyond gone it's reunion is so idiotic

LV 13

_Frost_

just bad story is just full of cliches and plot devices the author took from other stories no originality only good part about the novel was that the names weren't Chinese like most novels of this genre. Doesn't help that that the author added what might as well be a passive to force the mc to be some white knight that has to save everyone he comes across and sparing trash just to so they can repeatedly cause problems later.

LV 14

TheUnseenMountTai

Here we have another typical reincarnation novel, but who am I kidding you wouldn't be here, if you don't love them. MC: Smart MC, kind of evil since he got betrayed (logical) HAREM: Feels kind of forced at times (no he doesn't r*pe them), just that the relationships just... appear. BAMM New girlfriend. But this is only the case with the first two or three girls after which it gets a more natural feel WORLD: Can't say too much (would spoil some stuff if I did), but it's creative and has elements you don't see that often. CONCLUSION: Great novel I would highly recommend (and already have).

LV 12

leo26

It's a good novel, has a simple plot which is easy to follow, Keep up the good work.........................................................

LV 6

Jack_Priper

It's actually fine if you want to combine all the regular cliches and what not. But could you at least think it out? This could have been much better.

LV 13

Innocentslime

Writing quality is good. The story is good. Worldbuilding is very unique. Mc character is likeable. harm was a little bit shakey in the begning but things get natural afterwards. every place mc goes has people has their cultivation system which is different from other places. mc is not evil-hearted by nature but still kill villains. for me, this story is better than a few in the top 20. keep up the good work author and plz don't drop this story

LV 12

Wandurer

Writing quality is top notch. But the character development/designs? I’d read this only because the storyline and writing is good. However, if it wasn’t for the weak and path—- females who turn useless the moment the mc appears. I’d have loved reading this, unfortunately the female personalities are all the same. upity noses, low to med level intelligence. Over all useless but only serve a purpose in upping the mc’s attractiveness. Is their only females in this series? Where are all the males? The ones who are at least intelligent and serve a purpose by either being frenemies or high class non-friend. they only serve to be pulped to embers or humiliated. And it’s like everywhere the mc goes there is always a female who fawns over the mc as soon as he appears or ‘accidentally’ or ‘unintentionally’ touches them in some way or another pumping up their Stupidity. however I have only reached around chapters 20-30 so who knows, fingers crossed.

LV 13

JDice

This is not good. I dont know how people read this. Very cringe with some many cliches. Very hard to read i only kept reading due to rating but now i know its more like 3.5 and thats me being generous. 98% reviews dont seem authentic.

LV 15

Pointbreak

Shameless Author supporting his own work and here to give some pros and cons with clarifications may or may not have been explained in the story. Cons -First time writing. Some grammatical mistakes and weird sentence structures are to be expected. English was my subject in school (Only passed with bare minimum grade. Yes, I almost failed.) -MC is not likable at the start. He is a typical spoil prince of a kingdom of medicine with no redeemable traits except for his medical knowledge. He only strives to become a better person after losing what is important and granted a second life, embracing the better half of himself from the new life and remembering his father's past teachings. -MC is not overpowered from start. He raised his cultivation through pills in his past life. As a prince, he never needed to fight other people himself. His only battle experience comes hunting beasts. It's a gradual weak to strong process. -Harem. Some people like it, some people don't. It's just a matter of preference. However, I do admit I had lost control of the pacing and introduced too many females in the early parts of the story. I'm new to writing but I am learning and improving as I go. Take it as you will. -Cliches and some cringy scenes in the early parts of the story. If you can get past them, then I wish you an enjoyable read. If you can't, I wish you a pleasant journey on finding better novels to read as a fellow reader. Pros -Hmm... good world-building? Good comedy? I'm not really sure. Never really been a confident person to point out what's good about my story, but people seem to be enjoying it. I guess you just have to read to find out the pros and help me with this :P I probably dragged all your expectations down with all the cons listed by now, so if you still manage to read and it turns out better than you had expected, then all that is left are surprises, right? You can't be disappointed if you have no expectations xD I remember that being my mentality when receiving my test results way back in high school. Them passing grades for English were the best feeling. Anyway, don't take the story too seriously. If you also enjoy it like the others and crack a good laugh while immersing yourself in the world of Gaia then all is well. Happy reading!

LV 4

PatriarchReader

This novel did the almost impossible, which is having me drop it before the story even starts right, the author managed to put 4 cliches in the first 3 chapters (which were the ones I read), I just can't see how this can end up being somehow good after a few more chapters

LV 11

nick_picanzi_1227

This is Honestly one of the best novels ive ever read before. The author does an Excellent job in making the characters have their own individuality and development while also building a mysterious world where the reader will always be intrested in whats to come