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Honestly I loved this novel when it first came out, 1 year later and still no update. Dear author you still have fans who are waiting please let us know when you are ready to write again so we can leave some support 👍
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Is this dropped? Or the author's just taking a break? Just want to say that this is a great fine hope author's fine and will continue this.🤞
................................ Amazing, please let me know if your planning on writing more! ...........................................
Why you drop it why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why
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A really well done fanfic melding Pokemon into various worlds. Well written. I hope to see this continued and finished one day. Thank you for the excellent story.
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This story has a great character development and it doesn't go too fast or too slow supercalifragilisticexpialidocious supercalifragilisticexpialidocious
What a good find. thanks to webnovel i found this gem. hahahaha. first i thought this was like the other pokemon fanfic but i was wrong. I really like the MC. and the author is really a god. i salute u sir. good work. i cant help but to write a review for this book. thankk you author.
I really wanna see different character interacting with pokemon.😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
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HIDDEN GEM? CHECK ……………. ……………. ……………. ……………. ……………. ……………. ……………. ……………. ……………. ……………. ……………. ……………. ……………. ……………. ……………. ……………. ……………. …………….
Imagine all of your favorite animes, comics or films ok? Now, put all the 1000+ pokemons into the fray plus some OC ones. Add an MC who for one is not an a***ole and no harem (for now at least). Good! you are now reading it. Now i admit that the 'higher world' system is a bit meh (im still confused why tf are the OG 4 saying they dont give a fu*k about the MC but in the end he still get OP stuff from them). But i personally recommend this story for many reason. A beg for the author: pls make an harry potter arc with Harry having a mismagius (which is the closest pokemon apart from delphox to being a witch-wizard) you can even make hidden lore facts about how is mismagius the reincarnated soul of Lily. THAT would be sooo cool!
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Good novel. Satisfied an urged that I thought I never had. Keep doing this novel, don’t stop constantly updating because I am waiting to binge read this novel in the future. Don’t worry about people not reading, if you got enough chapter they will come back. Anyway, that’s all.
You just can't help loving this novel. It starts off a bit confusing but gets really amazing later on. There are some good and some bland Pokemon fanfics / crossover / SI on this site but this one, this one is a gem.
read it in one go. now, for the review: Writing Quality: Good grammar. You can see that it is edited because there are few or no mistakes at all. Stability of Updates: Good. For an original novel, a chapter per day is good. Story Development: Very good plot. Not stagnant and no fillers as well. Character Design: Good MC. Even though he is a liar, at least he is consistent with it. Even though it is fanfiction, the author introduces new ones that are not canon, so there is an element of mystery. World Background: Excellent. A very good example of a cross-over well done.
Good! The story is getting better! Worldbuilding is very good in this novel. It deserves more recognition... Keep up the good work, Author! Fighting!
Naruto Arc: Very Good. Worldbuilding is the best. Excited when he visits this world again and see the changes. One Piece Arc: A very solid start!!! Keep up the good job, Author!
I love the series but when is it gonna update? .....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I only have a few words for this story, This story is a HIDDEN GEM! 140+ Words huh? I wanna be the very best, Like no one ever was, To catch them is my real test, To train them is my cause. I will travel across the land, Searching far and wide, Teach Pokemon to understand, The power that's inside. Pokemon! Gotta catch 'em all, It's you and me, I know it's my destiny, Pokemon! Oh, you're my best friend, In a world we must defend. Pokemon! Gotta catch 'em all, A heart so true, Our courage will pull us through, You teach me, and I'll teach you, Pokemon! Gotta catch 'em all, gotta catch 'em all, Yeah! Every challenge along the way, With courage I will face, I will battle every day, To claim my rightful place. Come with me, the time is right, There's no better team, Arm in arm, we'll win the fight, It's always been our dream. Pokemon! Gotta catch 'em all, It's you and me, I know it's my destiny, Pokemon! Oh, you're my best friend, In a world we must defend. Pokemon! Gotta catch 'em all, A heart so true, Our courage will pull us through, You teach me, and I'll teach you, Pokemon! Gotta catch 'em all, gotta catch 'em all. Gotta catch 'em all, Gotta catch 'em all, Gotta catch 'em all, Yeah! Pokémon! Gotta catch 'em all, It's you and me, I know it's my destiny, Pokémon! Oh, you're my best friend, In a world we must defend. Pokémon! Gotta catch 'em all, A heart so true, Our courage will pull us through, You teach me, and I'll teach you, Pokémon! Gotta catch 'em all, gotta catch 'em all, Pokémon!
When are you going to be putting more chapters?🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔☹️☹️☹️☹️☹️☹️🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔
Good story i love pokemon novel this have to be one if the best i read...................... more update lol I know it hard to write a chapter but mads release plzz 🐯☺️
This is a great read. I’m not going to claim that it’s some thought provoking philosophical masterpiece, but it’s a fun and enjoyable read, and the author is passionate, responds to readers, and seems to have a plan as to where the story is going. The concept is great and it’s one of the few books on this site where I get really hyped for a mass release. All in all, this deserves way more attention and praise then it’s getting.
Great project, i love it. When a trainer enters absorb mode, do they aquire the chakra nature of the pokemon, if so could they manually use elemental jutsu or is it limited to what the pokemon knows? (Naruto world) Djdjjtjtkrkrkrkekekrjffnrmrkjrjfjfkdrjfjfjfkfkfkfkfkfkfkfkfkkrejehehehrntnrnejfkfjfkfkfkfkrkrkfjdjdjdjdjdjrjkdkdkdkddkdkkekeekkeekkeekieksksskkdiekekeekdjkdkdkdkddkkddkdkdkdkdkdkdkkddkdkdkd
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Hello, everyone. I'm the author of this fanfic. I shamelessly give myself a 5-star rating to help my ranking XD. Why did I write this fanfic: 1) I love Pokemon. XD 2) I love Anime. XD 3) I want to improve my English proficiency, especially in written English. 4) I just want to create a world wherein pokemon exists with other anime characters. XD 5) I want to write in my free time. If you have any suggestions as to what Anime world you like Okami to appear next, please suggest it in the reply section. Thank you and your stones, comments, and reviews are highly appreciated.
Honestly I loved this novel when it first came out, 1 year later and still no update. Dear author you still have fans who are waiting please let us know when you are ready to write again so we can leave some support 👍
dropped???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????!!!???????????????????????!?????????????????!!??????
Is this dropped? Or the author's just taking a break? Just want to say that this is a great fine hope author's fine and will continue this.🤞
................................ Amazing, please let me know if your planning on writing more! ...........................................
Why you drop it why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why
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A really well done fanfic melding Pokemon into various worlds. Well written. I hope to see this continued and finished one day. Thank you for the excellent story.
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This story has a great character development and it doesn't go too fast or too slow supercalifragilisticexpialidocious supercalifragilisticexpialidocious
What a good find. thanks to webnovel i found this gem. hahahaha. first i thought this was like the other pokemon fanfic but i was wrong. I really like the MC. and the author is really a god. i salute u sir. good work. i cant help but to write a review for this book. thankk you author.
I really wanna see different character interacting with pokemon.😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
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HIDDEN GEM? CHECK ……………. ……………. ……………. ……………. ……………. ……………. ……………. ……………. ……………. ……………. ……………. ……………. ……………. ……………. ……………. ……………. ……………. …………….
Imagine all of your favorite animes, comics or films ok? Now, put all the 1000+ pokemons into the fray plus some OC ones. Add an MC who for one is not an a***ole and no harem (for now at least). Good! you are now reading it. Now i admit that the 'higher world' system is a bit meh (im still confused why tf are the OG 4 saying they dont give a fu*k about the MC but in the end he still get OP stuff from them). But i personally recommend this story for many reason. A beg for the author: pls make an harry potter arc with Harry having a mismagius (which is the closest pokemon apart from delphox to being a witch-wizard) you can even make hidden lore facts about how is mismagius the reincarnated soul of Lily. THAT would be sooo cool!
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Good novel. Satisfied an urged that I thought I never had. Keep doing this novel, don’t stop constantly updating because I am waiting to binge read this novel in the future. Don’t worry about people not reading, if you got enough chapter they will come back. Anyway, that’s all.
You just can't help loving this novel. It starts off a bit confusing but gets really amazing later on. There are some good and some bland Pokemon fanfics / crossover / SI on this site but this one, this one is a gem.
read it in one go. now, for the review: Writing Quality: Good grammar. You can see that it is edited because there are few or no mistakes at all. Stability of Updates: Good. For an original novel, a chapter per day is good. Story Development: Very good plot. Not stagnant and no fillers as well. Character Design: Good MC. Even though he is a liar, at least he is consistent with it. Even though it is fanfiction, the author introduces new ones that are not canon, so there is an element of mystery. World Background: Excellent. A very good example of a cross-over well done.
Good! The story is getting better! Worldbuilding is very good in this novel. It deserves more recognition... Keep up the good work, Author! Fighting!
Naruto Arc: Very Good. Worldbuilding is the best. Excited when he visits this world again and see the changes. One Piece Arc: A very solid start!!! Keep up the good job, Author!
I love the series but when is it gonna update? .....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I only have a few words for this story, This story is a HIDDEN GEM! 140+ Words huh? I wanna be the very best, Like no one ever was, To catch them is my real test, To train them is my cause. I will travel across the land, Searching far and wide, Teach Pokemon to understand, The power that's inside. Pokemon! Gotta catch 'em all, It's you and me, I know it's my destiny, Pokemon! Oh, you're my best friend, In a world we must defend. Pokemon! Gotta catch 'em all, A heart so true, Our courage will pull us through, You teach me, and I'll teach you, Pokemon! Gotta catch 'em all, gotta catch 'em all, Yeah! Every challenge along the way, With courage I will face, I will battle every day, To claim my rightful place. Come with me, the time is right, There's no better team, Arm in arm, we'll win the fight, It's always been our dream. Pokemon! Gotta catch 'em all, It's you and me, I know it's my destiny, Pokemon! Oh, you're my best friend, In a world we must defend. Pokemon! Gotta catch 'em all, A heart so true, Our courage will pull us through, You teach me, and I'll teach you, Pokemon! Gotta catch 'em all, gotta catch 'em all. Gotta catch 'em all, Gotta catch 'em all, Gotta catch 'em all, Yeah! Pokémon! Gotta catch 'em all, It's you and me, I know it's my destiny, Pokémon! Oh, you're my best friend, In a world we must defend. Pokémon! Gotta catch 'em all, A heart so true, Our courage will pull us through, You teach me, and I'll teach you, Pokémon! Gotta catch 'em all, gotta catch 'em all, Pokémon!
When are you going to be putting more chapters?🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔☹️☹️☹️☹️☹️☹️🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔
Good story i love pokemon novel this have to be one if the best i read...................... more update lol I know it hard to write a chapter but mads release plzz 🐯☺️
This is a great read. I’m not going to claim that it’s some thought provoking philosophical masterpiece, but it’s a fun and enjoyable read, and the author is passionate, responds to readers, and seems to have a plan as to where the story is going. The concept is great and it’s one of the few books on this site where I get really hyped for a mass release. All in all, this deserves way more attention and praise then it’s getting.
Great project, i love it. When a trainer enters absorb mode, do they aquire the chakra nature of the pokemon, if so could they manually use elemental jutsu or is it limited to what the pokemon knows? (Naruto world) Djdjjtjtkrkrkrkekekrjffnrmrkjrjfjfkdrjfjfjfkfkfkfkfkfkfkfkfkkrejehehehrntnrnejfkfjfkfkfkfkrkrkfjdjdjdjdjdjrjkdkdkdkddkdkkekeekkeekkeekieksksskkdiekekeekdjkdkdkdkddkkddkdkdkdkdkdkdkkddkdkdkd
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Hello, everyone. I'm the author of this fanfic. I shamelessly give myself a 5-star rating to help my ranking XD. Why did I write this fanfic: 1) I love Pokemon. XD 2) I love Anime. XD 3) I want to improve my English proficiency, especially in written English. 4) I just want to create a world wherein pokemon exists with other anime characters. XD 5) I want to write in my free time. If you have any suggestions as to what Anime world you like Okami to appear next, please suggest it in the reply section. Thank you and your stones, comments, and reviews are highly appreciated.