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This story is loud for no reason and moves too fast with not enough detail... theres a lack of substance within the story. The writer should add more details about the setting of the story as well as the characters themselves.
This story is loud for no reason and moves too fast with not enough detail... theres a lack of substance within the story. The writer should add more details about the setting of the story as well as the characters themselves.