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an assassin who loves anime, that gets a chance to reborn in a one piece world.
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hello i am a new writer i hope to have a great experience and hopefully my first novel goes well.
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Embracing the strength in one piece bro bro even zorro, fitting the first lung, the grandline scala, the weight lifting training is already ton-based. You body admiral only uses 80 kg of weight, don't joke, man, it's better and understands the building of the world of one piece strength scale there like you like writing a fanfic one piece but never watched one piece 😔😟😠😡😑🤥👎👎👎👎👎👎
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what's up with age 8+5=13 too young or did you want to write 18 years old but forget the 1 and ended with 8 i mean hell i little kid become emperor i don't like this idea everyone in one piece was at least teenager not some little brat i say change that age who will give respect to a 13 years old kid say even luffy was 17 in the start 4 years older than what you want