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Journey of the Elemental God

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作者: mishagt

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What will a simple teen do on a journey for the godhood!
Here you will see the most(not sure) thrilling story of your life!





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amaturewriter

bias review........ stories is wasted,,,,.MC is an SI in BTTH but stories stupid cause of the ****ty lack of story development and barely present character development,,,also MC likes some ****ty chick that follows the cliche **** of her leaving his ass, plus there was barely and character development between them......this dude is a teenager thats a level 3 or 4 alchemist......how the **** isnt he famous and revered?....PLus the character relationships are forced as ****, MC saves chick, and done, the chick is in love.......overall its just wish fulfillment, with a stupid MC and shallow cliche love interests.

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