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This is awesome and I love what you did with it. It's got a lot of potential. Decently a my second favorite very closely rivaling ("Solo Leveling") as my fist favorite. ❤️
I've never met such a bad novel in a year so far ! This has horrible Grammer, spelling , ALL IN ALL ITS SHI^. DUDE EVERYTHING IS SO RUSHED ! JUST DROP URE NOVEL ALREADY ! JESUS CHRIST U MAKE HALO LOOK BAD ! MY CHILDHOOD WAS HALO AND NOW U JUST KILLED IT ! DONT WASTE URE TIME WITH THIS NOVEL !.🤧🤢🤮😡 NOVEL IS GARBAGE
Have potential,make a cover quick and update more!Then you can enter top list without a dubt,there are just too few good novels,most dropped...hope you don't make the same mistake!
This concept alone gives me an incredible boner, please don’t disappoint author man! ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) Oh yeah ps: weekly cha** with at least 9 pages of content on mobile (not including comment pages) is whatcha should shoot for, at least if you want this to take off (in my opinion)
Personally liked the fact that the Spartan has yet to adapt to the new environment but still trys to make the best of it. Also the fact that the limitations are there just that they are not many on the armors and the weaponry the soldier has
very good.........................................................................................................................................
This story has potential, however you need a cover to attract people to read it and as far as my review goes I will only give it 2.5/5 because it still new
Great potential for a webnovel plus love the idea of a Spartan II in the marvel universe. I'm curious to see how the MC enacts with the universe.
Alright so please don’t send me powers tones or whatever I just write cause like I wanted to try it. Turns out I suck LoL Y’all were awesome and encouraging. Hopefully I can comeback and write other fanfics or finish the ones I’ve already started publishing in here and the other 20 or so I have in reserve waiting to be published. I still have about 80 or less on my iPad notes I’m just tried though so I’m out school sucks. Just like my motivation. Peace out fellow writers and reader’s
This is awesome and I love what you did with it. It's got a lot of potential. Decently a my second favorite very closely rivaling ("Solo Leveling") as my fist favorite. ❤️
I've never met such a bad novel in a year so far ! This has horrible Grammer, spelling , ALL IN ALL ITS SHI^. DUDE EVERYTHING IS SO RUSHED ! JUST DROP URE NOVEL ALREADY ! JESUS CHRIST U MAKE HALO LOOK BAD ! MY CHILDHOOD WAS HALO AND NOW U JUST KILLED IT ! DONT WASTE URE TIME WITH THIS NOVEL !.🤧🤢🤮😡 NOVEL IS GARBAGE
Have potential,make a cover quick and update more!Then you can enter top list without a dubt,there are just too few good novels,most dropped...hope you don't make the same mistake!
This concept alone gives me an incredible boner, please don’t disappoint author man! ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) Oh yeah ps: weekly cha** with at least 9 pages of content on mobile (not including comment pages) is whatcha should shoot for, at least if you want this to take off (in my opinion)
Personally liked the fact that the Spartan has yet to adapt to the new environment but still trys to make the best of it. Also the fact that the limitations are there just that they are not many on the armors and the weaponry the soldier has
very good.........................................................................................................................................
This story has potential, however you need a cover to attract people to read it and as far as my review goes I will only give it 2.5/5 because it still new
Great potential for a webnovel plus love the idea of a Spartan II in the marvel universe. I'm curious to see how the MC enacts with the universe.
Alright so please don’t send me powers tones or whatever I just write cause like I wanted to try it. Turns out I suck LoL Y’all were awesome and encouraging. Hopefully I can comeback and write other fanfics or finish the ones I’ve already started publishing in here and the other 20 or so I have in reserve waiting to be published. I still have about 80 or less on my iPad notes I’m just tried though so I’m out school sucks. Just like my motivation. Peace out fellow writers and reader’s