6評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
I've liked what you've done so far its a great story and you keep it up and to every other reader who sees this should check this story out. ***********
Hoho, Reif here, Recs. The tone of your story is written nicely, not too aggressive and not too soft. Still, Idk if you plan to go to anime worlds or stay in this original world of yours? Anyway, keep up the good work, Recs...
Bro you kinda stole my last name, but I ain't got no problem wit dat. Don't mind the horrible Grammer but IDC this novel is good.....................
The novel has a pretty good beginning to it. I appreciate the references the MC makes throughout the novel so far. also when reading the novel the plot is great and had me wanting to read more when reading the first 5 chapters.
If it's action you're looking for, get those power stones ready cause you'll get it from this novel. Looking for something alittle spicier? Yup it's here. Great character intros and regular updates. I'm really impressed with the Author!
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact kenreview@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
I've liked what you've done so far its a great story and you keep it up and to every other reader who sees this should check this story out. ***********
Hoho, Reif here, Recs. The tone of your story is written nicely, not too aggressive and not too soft. Still, Idk if you plan to go to anime worlds or stay in this original world of yours? Anyway, keep up the good work, Recs...
Bro you kinda stole my last name, but I ain't got no problem wit dat. Don't mind the horrible Grammer but IDC this novel is good.....................
The novel has a pretty good beginning to it. I appreciate the references the MC makes throughout the novel so far. also when reading the novel the plot is great and had me wanting to read more when reading the first 5 chapters.
If it's action you're looking for, get those power stones ready cause you'll get it from this novel. Looking for something alittle spicier? Yup it's here. Great character intros and regular updates. I'm really impressed with the Author!
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact kenreview@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.