摘要
Four continents were ruled by man. To the barren north there were white faced devils, to the south there were mysterious islanders, to the west there were dessert tribes, and in the center of it all was the Middle Kingdom, the kingdom that strived to one day conquer the world.
Unrest could be felt in the shadows of the kingdom. Change was coming. Forgotten myths would become truths, legends would be reborn, and one person was at the center of it all, A-Narah.
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A-Narah's golden eyes burned like molten lava as she stared across a sea of dead bodies to the man who stood tall, and undisturbed by the stench of death.
She hated him.
Because of him she had lost everything that she had ever held dear.
But he was her savior.
Because of him she became who she was always meant to be.
And ultimately she promised him,
"Be it Hell, Earth, or Heaven I will stand by your side."
The man had cold gaze, but when he looked at the determined girl, his eyes warmed.
"If you hold out your hand, I swear by the all that lives under the skies, that I will never let it go."
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Update: *Currently on pause, back by August*
One chapter release a day, no less. More chapters will be released at the creator's discretion or at the point in time when a stockpile allows it.
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Writing as part of a review swap, and currently up to Chapter 28. I must say that this is a rather refreshing and interesting story. I do like the fantasy genre though I don't read it in WN for some strange reason. Anyway! On to the review. Writing Quality: English isn't my first language and any grammatical errors are negligible here. To me, at least. The flow is good and it doesn't detract from the reader's enjoyment of the story. Stability of Updates: 5* in good faith. I think 3 chapters is rather ambitious and would advise dear Author to just stick to one chapter a day. Stockpiling the chapters are good. Readers tend to like stability. Story Development: it's certainly different for me. I won't spoil the storyline but essentially, it's progressing well with some secret mixed in. Character Design/World Background: Its build-up is good and description is detailed enough for me. There are traits of MC that is coming out which is slightly disturbing but considering the synopsis, I suppose that is something that the Author is definately building up to. Anyway, overall, it was a good read. I like the unique names and MC's name makes me think of ancient Egyptian times. It's kinda cool, really.All the best Author!
To be honest, the story is nice and the writing is great, but I don't really like the name of the female lead, its an interesting story and I hope my fellow readers will try this out and support the author Thanks for your hard work, fighting💪💪💪💪
Hi the creator here! This is a new novel and my first one on here. So honest feedback is appreciated (i am known by my friends for my typos)...now on to the a tual novel. This novel follows the story of A-Narah. A girl who grew up in a very traditional and strict household. She and all of her sisters have been confined their entire lives. The story starts slow as I want readers to understand A-Narah's background, her ideologies and her values. All of this changes as the story progresses but to understand and build her as a character you need to see where she came from and how that change happened. This isn't a reincarnation novel where her personality can change right away and she can start fighting and having a lot of action. The novel is set in a fantasy world that mixes western and eastern cultures. You will find Middle Kingdom is a place where cultures have been forcefully mashed together. But more of that and why it is that way will get revealed in the story. The novel is also first and foremost a fantasy. I do love romance and romance will come in later, but there won't be any love at first site. People will have to guess who the ML is. So pick up the novel, save it, leave a review, vote, and comment. ~11am
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卷 1
- 1 A Woman's Place (1) 5 years ago
- 2 A Woman's Place (2) 5 years ago
- 3 A Woman's Place (3) 5 years ago
- 4 Visit (1) 5 years ago
- 5 Visit (2) 5 years ago
- 6 Visit (3) 5 years ago
- 7 What are you thinking? 5 years ago
- 8 That's Him (1) 5 years ago
- 9 That's Him (2) 5 years ago
- 10 Agreement 5 years ago
- 11 Too Early for Celebration 5 years ago
- 12 Answers (1) 5 years ago
- 13 Answers (2) 5 years ago
- 14 The Records 5 years ago
- 15 Goodbyes 5 years ago
- 16 Intruders 5 years ago
- 17 To Get Past the Gate 5 years ago
- 18 Cat and Mouse (1) 5 years ago
- 19 Cat and Mouse (2) 5 years ago
- 20 Little Girl with Golden Eyes (1) 5 years ago
- 21 Little Girl with Golden Eyes (2) 5 years ago
- 22 Little Girl with Golden Eyes (3) 5 years ago
- 23 Wolf's Bane (1) 5 years ago
- 24 Wolf's Bane (2) 5 years ago
- 25 Endless Desert (1) 5 years ago
- 26 Endless Desert (2) 5 years ago
- 27 Endless Desert (3) 5 years ago
- 28 Endless Desert (4) 5 years ago
- 29 Endless Desert (5) 5 years ago
- 30 Making a Splash 5 years ago
- 31 Asleep you Dream 5 years ago
- 32 Feasability of a Vision 5 years ago
- 33 Training Grounds (1) 5 years ago
- 34 Training Grounds (2) 5 years ago
- 35 Waiting 5 years ago
- 36 Bonfire (1) 5 years ago
- 37 Bonfire (2) 5 years ago
- 38 A New Ara (1) 5 years ago
- 39 A New Ara (2) 5 years ago
- 40 A New Ara (3) 5 years ago
- 41 The Story of Osaze (1) 5 years ago
- 42 The Story of Osaze (2) 5 years ago
- 43 Protest (1) 5 years ago
- 44 Protest (2) 5 years ago
- 45 Elon Awakens (1) 5 years ago
- 46 Elon Awakens (2) 5 years ago
- 47 Elon Awakens (3) 5 years ago
- 48 Lessons (1) 5 years ago
- 49 Lessons (2) 5 years ago
- 50 Author's Notice 5 years ago
Great book so far. As of chapter 7, the MC doesn't really know what's going on, so I don't either. But, I am interested to see what happens next. I will update my review as I read more. Also, the writing quality is excellent. Easily on par with published, professional authors.