摘要
this is Jet i died but that was Mr God mistake so he gave me another chance and now i got to reincarnate with 5 wishes hohoho what what i will creat my own legend
i don't own anything expect for the MC
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Please! Your writing is sucks can you change it?Please! Your writing is sucks can you change it?Please! Your writing is sucks can you change it?Please! Your writing is sucks can you change it?Please! Your writing is sucks can you change it?Please! Your writing is sucks can you change it?Please! Your writing is sucks can you change it?Please! Your writing is sucks can you change it?
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Like I say with all good novels it’s good and I would like some more please but the ratings sometimes are not good so I just wish I could hack Webnovel so I can make their rat
This is such an ugly story...**** don't read this story This is such an ugly story...**** don't read this story This is such an ugly story...**** don't read this story This is such an ugly story...**** don't read this story
Go to hell .... the author Is a little piece of **** !! Whatever he says makes it's all **** !! COME FIGHT ME U PUSSY ! INSULT ME AND CHICKEN OUT I WILL KILL U 😡🤬 . THIS SHE-MAN IS A KEYBOARD WORRIAR , ME IM A GOD DAWM WARRIOR ( US MARINES )! NOT SOME PUSSY VERSION ! IF I FIND U 😵👈 U DEAD 🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕
Awesome story nothing else mater so long story is intresting ............................... ............ . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . P.s.hats off to your imagination
卷 1 : One Piece I
- 1 0-meeting and talk with the god ' THIS IS MY WISHES ' 5 years ago
- 2 1-ONE PIECE WORLD 5 years ago
- 3 2-Meeting a certain Monkey 5 years ago
- 4 3- friends and maybe even brothers 5 years ago
- 5 4-before starting my adventure 5 years ago
- 6 5-starting adventure 5 years ago
- 7 6-bounty and unexpected meeting 5 years ago
- 8 7-recuiting Gon (edited) 5 years ago
- 9 8- and 9-rescuing 1/2 - 2/2 5 years ago
- 10 10-Smoker and Reverse Mountain (Edited) 5 years ago
- 11 11-the first island in Grand line 5 years ago
ofcourse i will praise myself i am selfish and i will do it more and more but i can say that i will not drop this one as the first i didn't have great ideas for the story also there is the fact i was busy with my study so i would try my best to make it for you guys in this one 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊 THANK YOU FOR READING I HOPE YOU ENJOY IT