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Asura's Wrath[DROPPED]

Eastern 11 章節 236.7K 流覽
作者: Gold_Dragon

4.47 (18 評分)

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---------Warning Mature Contents----------


He was regarded as trash because of his
poor cultivation talents and lowly bloodline.

On a certain day, our MC found a mysterious jewel or stone that was dyed red in clour inside a mysterious cave.

Will it make him fish to a dragon that sour to nine heavens? or Will he a trash forever?

Follow his journey in this cultivation world

Tags: Action,Adventure,Harem,R-18,Bloodlines,Mature,Cultivation.
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Source: Pin Intrest
I am new to writers world need supporters and there will be grammar mistakes.

No One 17 and Under Admitted

每周推薦票狀態

Rank -- 推薦票 榜單
Stone -- 推薦票

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18評論

4.47

  • 寫作品質
  • 更新的穩定性
  • 故事發展
  • 人物形象設計
  • 世界背景

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Gold_Dragon

The author here, just shamelessly rating myself:). I am new to the writer's world and there will be those damn grammar mistakes since English is not my main language. Fellow readers, I will be needing everyone supports to make this a success and don't forget to review your thoughts so, I can improve my self better,

5yr
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CrescentWolf

I think that the novel is really good. I like the plot so far. The stability of updates is good at a chapter a day and the story is developing quite well Please carry on writing as I'm enjoying your novel.

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AgileRampler

The novel looks promising hope it won't drop and continues the work. Use a steady update and how you will find many readers ...........__________.

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xWangan
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The novel is still in her beginning stage, with barely any chapters, so whatever I say here might not be true in the future. It's hard for me to talk about story development or world background, since the novel just began. From what I saw till now, it's a standard cultivation novel, If somebody likes cultivation, then they probably won't hate this. Writing quality is okay. There are some mistakes, but it's readable. A little advice through, if you want to use '___' symbols, it's fine. Just don't use too much of them, and try to always put the same amount of them when you use them. Right now, sometimes it's added less, sometimes it’s added more, it just doesn't look good.

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GovindP

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Roastedchicken12

The novel is good so far, The plot is intresting and is fun to read. There is a lag in English but still can be read. Author-it's your first novel doesn't give up on this one and the story update.

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Twizzyyyyyy

The story is progressing a lot. The story is great and the characters are good. I recommend this to the people who likes 18+ and a bit of action. The language is decent and from the looks of it, the author had been deeply thinking about each words. Each chapter improves the progress of the story. There are some parts that are a bit rushed but overall its good! I like it? Yes i do! Overall 9.5/10 Keep the good work Author. RECOMMEND RECOMMEND RECOMMEND RECOMMEND RECOMMEND RECOMMEND RECOMMEND RECOMMEND RECOMMEND RECOMMEND RECOMMEND RECOMMEND RECOMMEND RECOMMEND RECOMMEND RECOMMEND RECOMMEND RECOMMEND RECOMMEND RECOMMEND RECOMMEND RECOMMEND RECOMMEND RECOMMEND RECOMMEND RECOMMEND RECOMMEND RECOMMEND RECOMMEND RECOMMEND RECOMMEND RECOMMEND RECOMMEND RECOMMEND RECOMMEND RECOMMEND RECOMMEND RECOMMEND RECOMMEND RECOMMEND RECOMMEND RECOMMEND RECOMMEND RECOMMEND RECOMMEND RECOMMEND RECOMMEND

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Daoist1rvBov

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shadowflax

I really like this web novel but it seems like it has been dropped which I hope it hasn't. Author please start updating it again. That would be really great. If you can't please provide an explanation of why it is dropped.

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VhielF

For me, I don't really like novels with cussing words... I'm not good with it. However, looking at the way you transition from character to character, I find it amazing and well done! Disregarding grammar, the story has a lot of potential. Simple minded villain, sure! A great title also, Asura's wrath. Love it! Only I think the way of story telling is not for me. I couldn't bear to continue after that scene xD Nevertheless, well done!

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TheEgyptianMan

I think that the novel is really good. I like the plot so far.Use a steady update and how you will find many readersGreat novel...... ... .Great novel......

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stella2138

your book's not bad from the synopsis. but i think the cover's a little creepy. you should change it. don't worry when you find the right one,your heart will call out to it. i changed mine several times until i finally found the current one. also please try to update. readers get frustrated when there's no update.but i still give you a thumbs up

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作者 Gold_Dragon