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Grabe Ung story... 😢😢😢😢😢😢 nakakaiyak.. D q mapigilan Ung luha q...Parang totoong Totoo... Sana Madami pang stories na ma I share Ang author
揭示劇透 Nakakaiyak....sana me book 2 na. 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘
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I suggest you should try this one. a great story to read. the author knows how to capture the emotions of the readers. kahit ako talagang umiyak lalo na kay Kier. can't imagine na si Kier na matapang ay magagawang magmakaawa just to win back Zen.
Sa umpisa pa lang nagandahan na ko sa takbo ng storya. until naiiyak na ko at dala ko pa din sa dibdib ang sakit at panghihinayang. tatapusin mo talaga ang pagbabasa
I really love the story...up to my last...happiness,sacrifices,love,sadness,patience..all in all love the story author ur da best making us wait for the next update..hope kiezer padin till the end..love wins...
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It's an very good novel.it consist of different human emotions.It's like one moment i'm crying then next I'm angry or crying.It's feels like riding a roller coaster with those many emotions.I highly recommend it.
I love this book 💗💞 it feels like a roller coaster ride of emotions. Kikiligin ka, iiyak ka, mageexpect ka at masasaktan ka. mapapamahal ka sa characters.. job well done author! A big 👍🏼 for you. Gonna read the book 2 now.
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Grabi katatapos kulang basahin Ang story pero nasasaktan ako iyak ako NG iyak while reading this story Ang galing mo Author parang ako grabi Ang sakit sa didib pag pinipigilan mo Ang iyak mo gusto ko mang ilabas Ang kuha Ng Todo I can't marami kasing Tao sa Loob nag jeep hehehe salamat author nakakapang hinayang lang Sana Hindi mamatay si May Tao pa kayang katulad Kay kier mag Mahal saan Kaya nahahanap Ang tulad nya charot hehehe
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Ang Ganda ng story...minsan Hindi ko namamalayang tumutulo na pala luha ko..nadadala ako sa bawat chapter na nababasa ko...love it..tnx sa author..💖💖
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Ang Ganda Ng story, kapanapanabik... Kinilig at napaiyak ako,, Sana my kasunod na para mawala lahat Ng tanong ko😂 like,, makikilala ba Nung Bata Ang kapatid Ng momma nya,, at sa paano MagBabalik Ang alaala nya...nakakaatat talaga
Gustong gusto ko ang storya, nkakalungkot lng Kasi nabitin ako...daming luha ang umagos...dami kong katanungan...sobrang nakakabitin.....Sana may kasunod pa Ito...
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Grabeeeee .. kakaloka ung kwento. Sobrang gaaaaandaa 😊😊 Hindi ako makuntento kaya khit oras ng trabaho nagbabasa ako 😂😂✌✌ Good job author 👍👍 keep up the good work 😊😊 Thank you 😘😘
Iiyak k ng sobra.. sskt ang dib2 m😭😭 Nonetheless it was a compelling story of two people fighting for their right places with each other,fighting for their feelings and damn dto na mgccmula ang iyakan😅 Maiinlove kikiligin at iiyak ka😁 Mssktan ka😛 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 thanks author galing mo🤚🏻
There are a variety of contracted marriages themed stories, ut the story of Zen and Kier tickles my heart. The side romance stories of their friends do not overshadow the main leads nor bores a reader, rather it complements the story. It's full of wit , roller coaster ride of emotions, and ling for what's ahead in the main lead's life. You'll fall in love, be in love, fall out of love.. But still you'll love this story.
graveh ang ganda nang kwento pahingi po nang part 2 at yung ky gabe at chantal plssssss di po aku titigil hangat diko makita yung ibang story nito subrang ganya nang story
Ang ganda pho sana tuloy tuloy na ang update please🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘
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Hi author..thanks a lot for writing this story nakakainspired at nakakatouch yong estorya saya, kilig at lungkot pinaghalohalo lahat.Sana may book 2 na am always waiting.
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The more i read, the more addicting it can be.. Every chapter is exciting,,the emotion i felt in every chapter was overwhelming,...this novel is highly recommended😉🤗
I actually like the story. 😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥
I really like the whole story, it made me cry in a river..so touching, habang nagbabasa ako umiiyak ako. Sa author ng story i give u excellent grade, ang ganda ng story. Sana lumabas agad yung book 2 nito or continuation.
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Sad. Malungkot ako sa kinahinatnan ng storya na ito. Puro pride ang pinapairal, misunderstanding to the max ang umiiral. Di na lang sabihin, puro secrets pwede naman sabihin. Hindi ko inasah na ganoon ang ending. Masakit talaga. Nakakainis mga kontrabida sa buhay.
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I love this book..(lahat naman ata bsta c author ang nag sulat)..ma fi feel mo ksi ang binabasa mo dito..minsan tawa..minsan iyak..my stress reliever ever!!❤️❤️
Grabe Ung story... 😢😢😢😢😢😢 nakakaiyak.. D q mapigilan Ung luha q...Parang totoong Totoo... Sana Madami pang stories na ma I share Ang author
揭示劇透 Nakakaiyak....sana me book 2 na. 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘
揭示劇透 I suggest you should try this one. a great story to read. the author knows how to capture the emotions of the readers. kahit ako talagang umiyak lalo na kay Kier. can't imagine na si Kier na matapang ay magagawang magmakaawa just to win back Zen.
Sa umpisa pa lang nagandahan na ko sa takbo ng storya. until naiiyak na ko at dala ko pa din sa dibdib ang sakit at panghihinayang. tatapusin mo talaga ang pagbabasa
I really love the story...up to my last...happiness,sacrifices,love,sadness,patience..all in all love the story author ur da best making us wait for the next update..hope kiezer padin till the end..love wins...
揭示劇透 It's an very good novel.it consist of different human emotions.It's like one moment i'm crying then next I'm angry or crying.It's feels like riding a roller coaster with those many emotions.I highly recommend it.
I love this book 💗💞 it feels like a roller coaster ride of emotions. Kikiligin ka, iiyak ka, mageexpect ka at masasaktan ka. mapapamahal ka sa characters.. job well done author! A big 👍🏼 for you. Gonna read the book 2 now.
揭示劇透 Grabi katatapos kulang basahin Ang story pero nasasaktan ako iyak ako NG iyak while reading this story Ang galing mo Author parang ako grabi Ang sakit sa didib pag pinipigilan mo Ang iyak mo gusto ko mang ilabas Ang kuha Ng Todo I can't marami kasing Tao sa Loob nag jeep hehehe salamat author nakakapang hinayang lang Sana Hindi mamatay si May Tao pa kayang katulad Kay kier mag Mahal saan Kaya nahahanap Ang tulad nya charot hehehe
揭示劇透 Ang Ganda ng story...minsan Hindi ko namamalayang tumutulo na pala luha ko..nadadala ako sa bawat chapter na nababasa ko...love it..tnx sa author..💖💖
揭示劇透 Ang Ganda Ng story, kapanapanabik... Kinilig at napaiyak ako,, Sana my kasunod na para mawala lahat Ng tanong ko😂 like,, makikilala ba Nung Bata Ang kapatid Ng momma nya,, at sa paano MagBabalik Ang alaala nya...nakakaatat talaga
Gustong gusto ko ang storya, nkakalungkot lng Kasi nabitin ako...daming luha ang umagos...dami kong katanungan...sobrang nakakabitin.....Sana may kasunod pa Ito...
揭示劇透 Grabeeeee .. kakaloka ung kwento. Sobrang gaaaaandaa 😊😊 Hindi ako makuntento kaya khit oras ng trabaho nagbabasa ako 😂😂✌✌ Good job author 👍👍 keep up the good work 😊😊 Thank you 😘😘
Iiyak k ng sobra.. sskt ang dib2 m😭😭 Nonetheless it was a compelling story of two people fighting for their right places with each other,fighting for their feelings and damn dto na mgccmula ang iyakan😅 Maiinlove kikiligin at iiyak ka😁 Mssktan ka😛 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 thanks author galing mo🤚🏻
There are a variety of contracted marriages themed stories, ut the story of Zen and Kier tickles my heart. The side romance stories of their friends do not overshadow the main leads nor bores a reader, rather it complements the story. It's full of wit , roller coaster ride of emotions, and ling for what's ahead in the main lead's life. You'll fall in love, be in love, fall out of love.. But still you'll love this story.
graveh ang ganda nang kwento pahingi po nang part 2 at yung ky gabe at chantal plssssss di po aku titigil hangat diko makita yung ibang story nito subrang ganya nang story
Ang ganda pho sana tuloy tuloy na ang update please🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘
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Hi author..thanks a lot for writing this story nakakainspired at nakakatouch yong estorya saya, kilig at lungkot pinaghalohalo lahat.Sana may book 2 na am always waiting.
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The more i read, the more addicting it can be.. Every chapter is exciting,,the emotion i felt in every chapter was overwhelming,...this novel is highly recommended😉🤗
I actually like the story. 😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥
I really like the whole story, it made me cry in a river..so touching, habang nagbabasa ako umiiyak ako. Sa author ng story i give u excellent grade, ang ganda ng story. Sana lumabas agad yung book 2 nito or continuation.
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Sad. Malungkot ako sa kinahinatnan ng storya na ito. Puro pride ang pinapairal, misunderstanding to the max ang umiiral. Di na lang sabihin, puro secrets pwede naman sabihin. Hindi ko inasah na ganoon ang ending. Masakit talaga. Nakakainis mga kontrabida sa buhay.
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I love this book..(lahat naman ata bsta c author ang nag sulat)..ma fi feel mo ksi ang binabasa mo dito..minsan tawa..minsan iyak..my stress reliever ever!!❤️❤️