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$115,500 for the Best Adventure Novels +Get Hardcover Publish Hey Writers! Come to check out this adventure novel writing competition, both new and published stories can participate! This competition is mainly looking for four genres: Fantasy, Urban, Game, and Sci-fi. You can either submit your published works, rewrite some previous ideas, or create a new story if any given examples or tips inspired you! Web-fiction or Light Novel writing experience is desired, so you might be the winner! For more information, you may visit: https://bit.ly/2ObQnRy or contact Email :Rebecca_661@outlook.com
lol what can i say? It's a classic blairehawthorne linda story hahahaha strong female characters, overly long characterization moments, huge dusgusting monsters, and overly sexual scenes ahahahahahaha! I love it! THIS IS WHAT WE CAME FOR!
Ya'll should know about the greatness of Uncle Roberto and If you're new and don't know who he is, then read away. Just remember that he has a strong southern accent like a drunk American uncle that you could easily find in family reunions. Also, **** Duibhne.
a title change!?!?!?! :O and a cover change too!?!?!?! :O i can now be proud enough to say I was here before this novel was cool hurhurhurrrrr! inb4 you have enough time to do all these changes but still no update huhuhuhuhu!!! what baout vioooleeeeet!?!?!?! huhuhuhuuuu!
hmm... i see you've added some more chaps hoho... but its all auxiliaries huhuhuhuhu! they're all amazing poems tho i'm sure but i'm not good at reading poetry......... so yeah, i'm actually not sure XD i know spending aaaaalll my powerstones to support this book is worth it!!! amazing work as alwaaayysss but please update soon huhuhuhuhuhuh
daaamn... chapter 5... can't believe you killed off Damian.......... man, i love how you explained how OP he is in this chapter then you just BLEGH! killed him off in the same chapter too!!! soooo frustrating but sooo good too! i just cant! its too much! this chapter is too much! i was stressed the entire time! keep up the good work, author! definitely a big, big 5 star again just because of chapter 5
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Okay, alright, okaaaay! So, so far no update yet on chapter 5........ *nervous sweating* I just you know don't have to wait five months again for the next update huhuhuh please, author! You're killing meeee! You're so amazing at writing!!! Have to admit I'm a bit skeptical when I saw you write this while in the middle of SFTI vol5, and not to mention, its fantasy! Toootally! not! the same with all the stuff you've written so far, so yeah, was a bit skeptical about that. Then I saw chapter 4. I instantly thought the gore fest will not end fro mthere LOL
friend recommended this to me lololol he said he knows the author lololol hmmm made an account to read it and wowowwow! gotta admiiiit the stuff like the things about the kingdom and all that info is kinda boring to read TT__TT but wow i still really enjoyed it write morreeee.. !!
Honestly, after seeing the last season of game of thrones. Fantasy genres have been a bummer these days. Oddly enough I actually find this pretty interesting. Hopefully you can touch upon that Queen's death thing. It's quite mysterious. Or maybe touch upon how much that so called queen changed the kingdom. Pretty interesting story by far.
揭示劇透 huuuuuhhhh so far??? not bad really lololol was actually a bit skeptical when I saw that title but wwhat i got instead is exactly what i was looking for all this time yes! yes! yes! thank you author! its a slow fantasy with a huuuuuge just BIG emphasis on worldbuilding and that ugh, i love that! please make more! instant 5 stars right away!
It has a nice potential and a worthy piece to read. Might as well call it a hidden gem. This might be a little heavy for some readers but I'm sure that you'll be able to enjoy it.
Hey! Good day to you! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email mollyringdom*@*gmail.com (delete *）We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). Looking forward to your email.
$115,500 for the Best Adventure Novels +Get Hardcover Publish Hey Writers! Come to check out this adventure novel writing competition, both new and published stories can participate! This competition is mainly looking for four genres: Fantasy, Urban, Game, and Sci-fi. You can either submit your published works, rewrite some previous ideas, or create a new story if any given examples or tips inspired you! Web-fiction or Light Novel writing experience is desired, so you might be the winner! For more information, you may visit: https://bit.ly/2ObQnRy or contact Email :Rebecca_661@outlook.com
lol what can i say? It's a classic blairehawthorne linda story hahahaha strong female characters, overly long characterization moments, huge dusgusting monsters, and overly sexual scenes ahahahahahaha! I love it! THIS IS WHAT WE CAME FOR!
Ya'll should know about the greatness of Uncle Roberto and If you're new and don't know who he is, then read away. Just remember that he has a strong southern accent like a drunk American uncle that you could easily find in family reunions. Also, **** Duibhne.
a title change!?!?!?! :O and a cover change too!?!?!?! :O i can now be proud enough to say I was here before this novel was cool hurhurhurrrrr! inb4 you have enough time to do all these changes but still no update huhuhuhuhu!!! what baout vioooleeeeet!?!?!?! huhuhuhuuuu!
hmm... i see you've added some more chaps hoho... but its all auxiliaries huhuhuhuhu! they're all amazing poems tho i'm sure but i'm not good at reading poetry......... so yeah, i'm actually not sure XD i know spending aaaaalll my powerstones to support this book is worth it!!! amazing work as alwaaayysss but please update soon huhuhuhuhuhuh
daaamn... chapter 5... can't believe you killed off Damian.......... man, i love how you explained how OP he is in this chapter then you just BLEGH! killed him off in the same chapter too!!! soooo frustrating but sooo good too! i just cant! its too much! this chapter is too much! i was stressed the entire time! keep up the good work, author! definitely a big, big 5 star again just because of chapter 5
揭示劇透 Okay, alright, okaaaay! So, so far no update yet on chapter 5........ *nervous sweating* I just you know don't have to wait five months again for the next update huhuhuh please, author! You're killing meeee! You're so amazing at writing!!! Have to admit I'm a bit skeptical when I saw you write this while in the middle of SFTI vol5, and not to mention, its fantasy! Toootally! not! the same with all the stuff you've written so far, so yeah, was a bit skeptical about that. Then I saw chapter 4. I instantly thought the gore fest will not end fro mthere LOL
friend recommended this to me lololol he said he knows the author lololol hmmm made an account to read it and wowowwow! gotta admiiiit the stuff like the things about the kingdom and all that info is kinda boring to read TT__TT but wow i still really enjoyed it write morreeee.. !!
Honestly, after seeing the last season of game of thrones. Fantasy genres have been a bummer these days. Oddly enough I actually find this pretty interesting. Hopefully you can touch upon that Queen's death thing. It's quite mysterious. Or maybe touch upon how much that so called queen changed the kingdom. Pretty interesting story by far.
揭示劇透 huuuuuhhhh so far??? not bad really lololol was actually a bit skeptical when I saw that title but wwhat i got instead is exactly what i was looking for all this time yes! yes! yes! thank you author! its a slow fantasy with a huuuuuge just BIG emphasis on worldbuilding and that ugh, i love that! please make more! instant 5 stars right away!
It has a nice potential and a worthy piece to read. Might as well call it a hidden gem. This might be a little heavy for some readers but I'm sure that you'll be able to enjoy it.
Hey! Good day to you! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email mollyringdom*@*gmail.com (delete *）We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). Looking forward to your email.