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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
great novel with bio-chip tag (which like a lot). i like how you did not the MC op. Writing Quality: well English is not my first language, but i am not having trouble reading and i find it above average. Character Design: i find it good so far. World Background: here is my problem, i think the world (MC surrounding) need more description. however, so far so good i like it very much and would like to see more chapters. keep the good work author 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
I am really enjoying this story and hope that it continues without the author dropping it. :) WOrds...t wgt3gt3gg wgg gtwg wg erewg ewg ewe weg
It might be a bit quick to judge but this story is quite enjoyable for now. I am native english speaker but i didn’t spot any mistakes Thank you and please don’t drop this
Authors can rate their own stories, lol. I will give myself a 4-stars rating, since I don't believe in perfection. Have a good read, and please write some critiques. I am open to suggestions.
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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
great novel with bio-chip tag (which like a lot). i like how you did not the MC op. Writing Quality: well English is not my first language, but i am not having trouble reading and i find it above average. Character Design: i find it good so far. World Background: here is my problem, i think the world (MC surrounding) need more description. however, so far so good i like it very much and would like to see more chapters. keep the good work author 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
I am really enjoying this story and hope that it continues without the author dropping it. :) WOrds...t wgt3gt3gg wgg gtwg wg erewg ewg ewe weg
It might be a bit quick to judge but this story is quite enjoyable for now. I am native english speaker but i didn’t spot any mistakes Thank you and please don’t drop this
Authors can rate their own stories, lol. I will give myself a 4-stars rating, since I don't believe in perfection. Have a good read, and please write some critiques. I am open to suggestions.