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The Golden Thread: A Modern Cajun Fairytale

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作者: CK_Leger

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Josie Breaux had lived almost all her life as a modern-day nomad. That was strange enough, but at sixteen, she developed the ability to control plants. She thought moving to her mother's rural hometown in south Louisiana would be a way to gain some normalcy. Soon, though, she finds herself thrust into a magical conflict hundreds of years in the making. The choices she makes may very well cost her her humanity and her life.

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anon88

This is a review of the first two chapters. The story is a well written tale about teenage witch Josie who has just moved to her Mother’s home town. Both the main character and secondary characters are well described through third party commentary, differences in dialogue word choice, and the author’s own description. For example, Josie who was a nomad and her cousin Nat who grew up in southern Louisiana do not use the same colloquiums. The setting is also given the same attention to detail. Josie’s rental house is not just a one story house but is a white house placed on stilts to avoid flooding; details like this make the house unique to the story setting. The plot has not advanced much, but I believe the author has something exciting in store.

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