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I Love the story ^_^ ............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................140...............
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Its really good and interesting g I would be happy if three is sope,namjin,and vminkook and yeah also the bad guy needs to be punished for his crime also plz don't let there be a sad ending where one of the members die
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Very very nice story.. Btw I am an Indian army who is wishing bts to do a concert in India. I just don't want bts to go to the military but as it is compulsory in Korea they have to go 😢😢
Nice story book to read when bored. Good suspense till what I read. I can't say that u should improve bcoz I never wrote such books till now write a story in my exams needs a lot of time, but you've got very nice ideas and patience. you nice keep going 💜💜
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The story reveals too much details on an event which like day to day life and nothing suprising. It does not make me wondering what happen next.
Amazing I love this story The author has done a great job of making me feel every emotion Greatjob you made me cry but im proud to cry tody thanks
I Love the story ^_^ ............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................140...............
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Its really good and interesting g I would be happy if three is sope,namjin,and vminkook and yeah also the bad guy needs to be punished for his crime also plz don't let there be a sad ending where one of the members die
揭示劇透 Very very nice story.. Btw I am an Indian army who is wishing bts to do a concert in India. I just don't want bts to go to the military but as it is compulsory in Korea they have to go 😢😢
Nice story book to read when bored. Good suspense till what I read. I can't say that u should improve bcoz I never wrote such books till now write a story in my exams needs a lot of time, but you've got very nice ideas and patience. you nice keep going 💜💜
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The story reveals too much details on an event which like day to day life and nothing suprising. It does not make me wondering what happen next.
Amazing I love this story The author has done a great job of making me feel every emotion Greatjob you made me cry but im proud to cry tody thanks