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I really like the story so far.. 😍😍😍😍😍 I can't wait for the next chapter.. 😆😆😆😆😆 Please update again... 💖💖💖💖💖
This story is sooooooo beautifulllllll. The plot or story line is unique, different, accurate, consequently and concise. Author you're doing a great job ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️😍😍😍. I honestly wish that Rhio and Jasmine fights through the storm together. Though it looks like the baby is lost 😭😢😥, I want them to still be strong in love knowing that losing the baby will change everything about them, and Rhio's feelings towards Jasmine ☹️. Derrick and his stupid friends should be thoroughly punished for all they did to Jasmine 🤪😎😎. Jasmine should also learn to open up to Rhio. Infact both should learn to communicate and be fair in their relationship. Finally, I hope we have another Kevin or Rhio or Jasmine jnr soon to safeguard the love of our ML and FL or hopefully we actually didn't lose baby Kevin. Like, a miracle actually did happen 🙄🙇🤦😃🤣🤭🤗
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did the story just end like that? i dk why this male lead seemed so helpless and immature.
deo, will give all the evidence that he gather... rhio, will go to the airport, when he found *******.. he will hug and kiss her... ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
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Wow, this is awesome. All the characters are on point. I really love how this novel was written. The suspense is just right, the love is real. I really hope everyone will read this novel when you come across. Keep it up author. LOVE YOUR BOOK.
gusto k tlga itong novel story na ito kce mafefeel mo tlga ung love,betreyal,sakit,saya s mga character nila,naiiyak k n matutuwa k s mga ugali nila...deep s puso love tlga ang mararamdaman m
This story is completely awesome. I love it ! 💓💓💓It says a lot about the author's creativity.....I especially love how the main characters tell themselves the truth after they make mistakes and they are always ready to make amends.. that's how relationshi** should be. Well done author👍👍👍👍
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I'm in love with the story so far🥰🥰🥰🥰 everything is perfect..but pls speed up with the chapters🥺🥺. the thought of Jasmin leaving Rhio is so f**king annoying ...but you're the author so😁😁😁😁
I can't stay a day without reading this novel...thanks author I support ur work 💯💯💯❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
I live this book it’s really good and I hope that it keeps going on and on 😁😁😁 I would recommend this book if you want something catchy to read
Author thanks 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏for such an awesome story. I really really really love 💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝the novel.Thanks once more
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Please I need more chapters oo, u can't leave us hanging 🥺 🧐 😱😱😱 now that's it's getting better. I can't wait to see who is the father between both men.
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I'm excited to read this story. 😍 I super love it, my friend recimended this to me. I am soooo excitedddd, I just hope that 'till the end it will gonna be super duper interesting.....
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I love the storyline, it' s unpredictable. The characters are a bit mysterious especially Rhio.The stories have many twists.I hope that Rhio' s character would be more gentle in the next episode. Jasmin 's character is amazing. What I love about in this novel is that the author keeps updating the stoty for short period of time .Lastly, I am longing for more romantis scenes between Rhio and Jasmin for the incoming chapters. God bless Author!
I really like the story so far.. 😍😍😍😍😍 I can't wait for the next chapter.. 😆😆😆😆😆 Please update again... 💖💖💖💖💖
This story is sooooooo beautifulllllll. The plot or story line is unique, different, accurate, consequently and concise. Author you're doing a great job ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️😍😍😍. I honestly wish that Rhio and Jasmine fights through the storm together. Though it looks like the baby is lost 😭😢😥, I want them to still be strong in love knowing that losing the baby will change everything about them, and Rhio's feelings towards Jasmine ☹️. Derrick and his stupid friends should be thoroughly punished for all they did to Jasmine 🤪😎😎. Jasmine should also learn to open up to Rhio. Infact both should learn to communicate and be fair in their relationship. Finally, I hope we have another Kevin or Rhio or Jasmine jnr soon to safeguard the love of our ML and FL or hopefully we actually didn't lose baby Kevin. Like, a miracle actually did happen 🙄🙇🤦😃🤣🤭🤗
揭示劇透 did the story just end like that? i dk why this male lead seemed so helpless and immature.
deo, will give all the evidence that he gather... rhio, will go to the airport, when he found *******.. he will hug and kiss her... ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
揭示劇透 Wow, this is awesome. All the characters are on point. I really love how this novel was written. The suspense is just right, the love is real. I really hope everyone will read this novel when you come across. Keep it up author. LOVE YOUR BOOK.
gusto k tlga itong novel story na ito kce mafefeel mo tlga ung love,betreyal,sakit,saya s mga character nila,naiiyak k n matutuwa k s mga ugali nila...deep s puso love tlga ang mararamdaman m
This story is completely awesome. I love it ! 💓💓💓It says a lot about the author's creativity.....I especially love how the main characters tell themselves the truth after they make mistakes and they are always ready to make amends.. that's how relationshi** should be. Well done author👍👍👍👍
揭示劇透 I'm in love with the story so far🥰🥰🥰🥰 everything is perfect..but pls speed up with the chapters🥺🥺. the thought of Jasmin leaving Rhio is so f**king annoying ...but you're the author so😁😁😁😁
I can't stay a day without reading this novel...thanks author I support ur work 💯💯💯❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
I live this book it’s really good and I hope that it keeps going on and on 😁😁😁 I would recommend this book if you want something catchy to read
Author thanks 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏for such an awesome story. I really really really love 💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝the novel.Thanks once more
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Please I need more chapters oo, u can't leave us hanging 🥺 🧐 😱😱😱 now that's it's getting better. I can't wait to see who is the father between both men.
This is making meeeeeeeeeeeee moreeeeeeeeeee curioussssssssss everyday with soooooooooooooooooooooo muchhhhhhhhhhhhh loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee yepppppppppiiiiiiiiii
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I'm excited to read this story. 😍 I super love it, my friend recimended this to me. I am soooo excitedddd, I just hope that 'till the end it will gonna be super duper interesting.....
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I love the storyline, it' s unpredictable. The characters are a bit mysterious especially Rhio.The stories have many twists.I hope that Rhio' s character would be more gentle in the next episode. Jasmin 's character is amazing. What I love about in this novel is that the author keeps updating the stoty for short period of time .Lastly, I am longing for more romantis scenes between Rhio and Jasmin for the incoming chapters. God bless Author!