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Its hard to find a sasuke based story that is not a mess. This has chuCked those expEctations out The window. Please keep it up 👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
I will stop here. no only the grammar is trash but other obvious mistake are to obvious. like him being able to fake emotions and not the hogake or the yamanakas(expert in information extraction) notice, and now the author make the amateur mistake of making him hide sharingan thinking it will help the mc when will only make his life worse
Grammar is bad sentences and quotations are wrong text is hard to read the story is slow for some reason the mc tries to act 'normal' which isnt at all the author focuses too much on useless things pretty sure just to increase the word count the charachter is unlikable he hass too many mood swings he is also polite for no reason he also does nothing for himself and is only trying to show that he is normal and skips training in the first few chapters he also calls people with their clan name which is stupid the updating stability is good the author should try using grammarly i also use it for improving the grammar in my trash fanfic he also acts 'fake' he isnt very human like and people talking is awkward sorry for no qoutation marks and bad grammar i am using my phone.
at first his personality is okay for me i guess (because i don't have any to read), but in the chunin preliminary he started trashtalking?! why is that?!
Oh my goodness is story is busting. This updating stability is very consistent unlike many other reincarnated as Sasuke fanfiction. Mc as Sasuke? That's a big yes for me. Naruto is a good choice as a world background. There's just one problem though. The writing quality. I understand the problem so I dont really mind. I think I enjoy this fanfic because of the mc. Even if the Author updates the story at a good rate I can't get enough of it. Thanks for the fanfic author, this is one of the best Naruto fanfiction.
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I read 2 chapters. I don't recommend this to anyone, I don't really know what is the plot about or anything like that. The grammar though is abysmal. It is like the author doesn't really speak English at all. Anyways, this is a biased negative opinion based on my experience with the non-existent grammar. Many may differ and find this as a masterpiece I don't really know. Proceed at your own discretion.
A really good fanfic if I do say so myself, the writing is enjoyable and the idea is also very interesting so I really recommend reading it. Pls don't stop writing author-san.
Naruto fanfiction in slow life theme, very enjoyable........................................................................................
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hmm...well there are acutually a ton of 'reborn as sauske' fic but this one is unique cause instead unlike in other fics sauske simply training all day or dreaming to be the strongest this sauske has shown some importace in creating relationship and actually has friendly attitude towards everyone, regular naruto fanfic reader will find this sauske personality unsatisying as they were used to the cold and arrogant sauske not a Irie sauske but belive me this is worth a read you surely enjoy it
this is a nice Naruto fanfic about the MC being transmigrated into the body of sasuke after the uchiha massacre pretty well executed the grammar is a bit iffy but it's still pretty great definitely worth a read. Do give it a try.
So far it's pretty interesting and I'm enjoying it. Keep up the good work author!👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
The beginning of the fic is very good, it shows a little bit of everyday life, it only shows more realism in the story, that too is very good. I hope it doesn't fall.
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Thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you
Its hard to find a sasuke based story that is not a mess. This has chuCked those expEctations out The window. Please keep it up 👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
I will stop here. no only the grammar is trash but other obvious mistake are to obvious. like him being able to fake emotions and not the hogake or the yamanakas(expert in information extraction) notice, and now the author make the amateur mistake of making him hide sharingan thinking it will help the mc when will only make his life worse
Grammar is bad sentences and quotations are wrong text is hard to read the story is slow for some reason the mc tries to act 'normal' which isnt at all the author focuses too much on useless things pretty sure just to increase the word count the charachter is unlikable he hass too many mood swings he is also polite for no reason he also does nothing for himself and is only trying to show that he is normal and skips training in the first few chapters he also calls people with their clan name which is stupid the updating stability is good the author should try using grammarly i also use it for improving the grammar in my trash fanfic he also acts 'fake' he isnt very human like and people talking is awkward sorry for no qoutation marks and bad grammar i am using my phone.
at first his personality is okay for me i guess (because i don't have any to read), but in the chunin preliminary he started trashtalking?! why is that?!
Oh my goodness is story is busting. This updating stability is very consistent unlike many other reincarnated as Sasuke fanfiction. Mc as Sasuke? That's a big yes for me. Naruto is a good choice as a world background. There's just one problem though. The writing quality. I understand the problem so I dont really mind. I think I enjoy this fanfic because of the mc. Even if the Author updates the story at a good rate I can't get enough of it. Thanks for the fanfic author, this is one of the best Naruto fanfiction.
Good one Good one . Hey Wow . . . . . . . . . . . Good one . Hey Wow Good one . Hey Wow . . . . . . . . . . . Good one Good one . Hey Wow . . . . . . . . . . . Good one . Hey Wow . . . . . . Hey Wow . . . . . . . . . . . Hey Wow . . . . . . . . . . . Good one . Hey Wow . . . . .
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I read 2 chapters. I don't recommend this to anyone, I don't really know what is the plot about or anything like that. The grammar though is abysmal. It is like the author doesn't really speak English at all. Anyways, this is a biased negative opinion based on my experience with the non-existent grammar. Many may differ and find this as a masterpiece I don't really know. Proceed at your own discretion.
A really good fanfic if I do say so myself, the writing is enjoyable and the idea is also very interesting so I really recommend reading it. Pls don't stop writing author-san.
Naruto fanfiction in slow life theme, very enjoyable........................................................................................
.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!
hmm...well there are acutually a ton of 'reborn as sauske' fic but this one is unique cause instead unlike in other fics sauske simply training all day or dreaming to be the strongest this sauske has shown some importace in creating relationship and actually has friendly attitude towards everyone, regular naruto fanfic reader will find this sauske personality unsatisying as they were used to the cold and arrogant sauske not a Irie sauske but belive me this is worth a read you surely enjoy it
this is a nice Naruto fanfic about the MC being transmigrated into the body of sasuke after the uchiha massacre pretty well executed the grammar is a bit iffy but it's still pretty great definitely worth a read. Do give it a try.
So far it's pretty interesting and I'm enjoying it. Keep up the good work author!👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
The beginning of the fic is very good, it shows a little bit of everyday life, it only shows more realism in the story, that too is very good. I hope it doesn't fall.
moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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