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look, there are people who like harem, and people who don’t like harem, I’m the type who likes it, so I don’t see a problem in this type of story even though at the beginning the protagonist swears to stay with only one girl, but as he has already presented others, of course I would not like him to reject them, they all like the protagonist and among them there is one that I prefer the most, so I would really like it to end in harem, thanks author
I'm a fan of Pio's work, so I came in expecting to like this as well. I surely wasn't disappointed, this has become one of my favorite novels I've ever read. Not to mention wuxing and dongmei are probably the best couple there is. Highly recommended!
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It was supposed to be a story about adventures of a talented and seasoned mercenary, but it turned into one about a brain-addled, horny teenager. Disappointing.
Quite a new feel to reading this type of novel. Prison Break, lesgooo! The beginning is good so far. Writing is good and story. Thank god I can't see any obvious typos unlike some novels even the #1 Power Ranked got some glaring typos.
look, there are people who like harem, and people who don’t like harem, I’m the type who likes it, so I don’t see a problem in this type of story even though at the beginning the protagonist swears to stay with only one girl, but as he has already presented others, of course I would not like him to reject them, they all like the protagonist and among them there is one that I prefer the most, so I would really like it to end in harem, thanks author
I'm a fan of Pio's work, so I came in expecting to like this as well. I surely wasn't disappointed, this has become one of my favorite novels I've ever read. Not to mention wuxing and dongmei are probably the best couple there is. Highly recommended!
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It was supposed to be a story about adventures of a talented and seasoned mercenary, but it turned into one about a brain-addled, horny teenager. Disappointing.
Quite a new feel to reading this type of novel. Prison Break, lesgooo! The beginning is good so far. Writing is good and story. Thank god I can't see any obvious typos unlike some novels even the #1 Power Ranked got some glaring typos.
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