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Mako D. Carson was a terrifying and odd existence!! Born with wolf ear and a tail, Mako was destined to be different from everyone else, but it didn't just stop there.
Mako was extremely intelligent, learning and picking up on things in matter of minutes or even seconds. He was skilled in combat, becoming proficient in all types of hand-to-hand combat techniques. He was strong, adopting the workout he had once seen in an anime.
He was also extremely hard to entertain and easily got bored. Above all else though, he was lazy!!!
Though it was hard to surprise him and change his usual bored expression, Mako was exceptionally confused one day when he woke up and found himself in the world of Naruto.
Mako now travels through the world in search of a way back home. However, he soon realizes that he doesn't need to go home, because why would anyone want to go back to a boring world? This was a fictional world, and he figured he might as well have some fun while he was here
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The the mc is unique with appearance and personality, the story development so far is great, the chapter update rate is also great the only bad thing is your grammar but it isn’t that obvious, you only need to proofread for errors, and i personally think that the story has potential.
The story was so thrilling I have already read it 2 time and I recommend every one to read it the story line so cool and awesome and the way they designed there characters was way too awesome
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I re added this review because he finally uploaded a chapter. thanks. sorry for doubting you. 140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140
Great novel definitely want more I’m glad your making such a high quality naruto novel 10/10 bravo tsunade got big tits tho This is gonna be one of three Yadayadayadayadayadayadayadayadayadayadayadayada yadayadayadayadayadayadayadayadayadayadayadayada Yadayadayadayadayadayadayadayadayadayadayadayada yadayadayadayadayadayadayadayadayadayadayadayada Yadayadayadayadayadayadayadayadayadayadayadayada yadayadayadayadayadayadayadayadayadayadayadayada Yadayadayadayadayadayadayadayadayadayadayadayada yadayadayadayadayadayadayadayadayadayadayadayada Yadayadayadayadayadayadayadayadayadayadayadayada yadayadayadayadayadayadayadayadayadayadayadayada
Great story. Please more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
Three chapters in this novel as some serious potential. Hope you continue writing ~Autor-san~ 😂 Hope to see you writing this in the futur Max
This flower has been asked, this flower will deliver. But there is the 140 character thing that just grinds my floral gears so imma rant till this is a suitable length
So far this story is progressing very well. It has a well thought out character. He has aggressive tendencies that will go well with the shinobi world. He might have a good rivalry with Might Guy because they both like to either fight or get their body to the peak.
I see a lot of potential in the novel the Mc is perfect a little badass if you do not put it super op at the beginning and let it train it would be great. If you upload daily chapters I will support you with some power stones :) Do not give up pls.
I like the concept, so here is 5 stars to motivate you to write more. There is only one chapter out so I can’t really review it properly but it looks like it has promise
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- 1 Prologue (1/2)- This World Has Nothing To Offer...... 5 years ago
- 2 Prologue (2/2)- So This New World Had Better Be Exciting 5 years ago
- 3 Transported To The World Of Naruto!! The Back And Forth Interrogation!! 5 years ago
- 4 Getting His Stuff Back!!! The Chaotic Black Chakra!! 5 years ago
- 5 Mako Vs. Kiba!!! The Rage Coming From A Damaged Hoodie!! 5 years ago
- 6 The Power Of Chaos Chakra!! Mako's Collapse?? 5 years ago
- 7 Tsunade and Mako!!! So It's Not Just Hinata?? Is It A Coincidence Or Something More?? 5 years ago
- 8 Hinata's Confusion And Recollection Of Events!!! 5 years ago
- 9 Mako Gains Control Over His Chakra! The Training Schedule!! 5 years ago
Truthfully it's my first time writing so I would really love feedback. All reviews are welcome as long as you bring things that'll help me improve instead of simply bringing me your own personal bias. Mako D. Carson will not stray from his original personality but he may change how he interacts with people depending on how things play out. I just want to be a good writer, almost as good as Einlion (if you know who that is then you obviously have class). Just give my book a try before you hate on it. If you don't like it then feel free to give a bad review as I don't particularly mind.