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I love this story. It just keeps attaking my heart. I would recommend this to all of my friends.😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😙😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜
Guys I'm trying to update more I'm sorry I've hit some writer's block so please bear with me I know this story isn't good and there are better ones who update frequently but thank you all for your support if any of you have ideas on what should happen next please let me know🙃♥️🏳️🌈
It’s awesome and the best story yet. Good one Emily! You NEED to do more chapters bc I am hooked to this. Really work and don’t listen to the haters! It’s a good one and never give up on it.
揭示劇透 I hope you end up liking this story I have a few things planned please enjoy and let me know what you think🙃 Im working hard to create this story even tho it's not that good
揭示劇透 Sorry it took so long it has been a while since I updated this story and you all probably hate it I am so sorry my phone was erased and I lost my account but luckily I found it
揭示劇透 I love this story. It just keeps attaking my heart. I would recommend this to all of my friends.😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😙😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜
Guys I'm trying to update more I'm sorry I've hit some writer's block so please bear with me I know this story isn't good and there are better ones who update frequently but thank you all for your support if any of you have ideas on what should happen next please let me know🙃♥️🏳️🌈
It’s awesome and the best story yet. Good one Emily! You NEED to do more chapters bc I am hooked to this. Really work and don’t listen to the haters! It’s a good one and never give up on it.
揭示劇透 I hope you end up liking this story I have a few things planned please enjoy and let me know what you think🙃 Im working hard to create this story even tho it's not that good
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Sorry it took so long it has been a while since I updated this story and you all probably hate it I am so sorry my phone was erased and I lost my account but luckily I found it
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