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22% (Dropped) Boku no Toraburu / Chapter 20: Not a Chapter

章節 20: Not a Chapter

Alright, I think I need to make a few things clear. So it is imperative that all the readers read this.

First of all, I am a writer and I will always try to pursue character development. With that being said, there are many issues raised against Rito's dark past.

What I am trying to do is to create a character that is able to overcome his dark past and actually see the relationships important to him and cherish them.

On the other hand, one of the readers by the name LongAdi raised a point that the reaction portrayed by Tatsumaki was extremely uncharacteristic as Rito only tried to get closer to her.

Now, let's breakdown Tatsumaki's character. She was subjected to human experimentation and she can never completely trust a human all her life except her little sister.

In anime, she is displayed as a tsundere legal loli, but I believe that of she were to be a real character, her reaction might have been even worse.

It can also be seen that she is still overshadowed by her past and still isn't able to let go of her hatred, which is extremely normal.

With that being said, all I want to show is that even if Rito has gone through extreme tortures ( no, he never gets castrated, never!), he will be able to see another side of life during his darkest moments and emerge towards light.

At least, I will do my best to make it portray as such.

Thank you for hearing out my ranting.

Now, on to the lighter side, Why don't you guys suggest awesome ability from any manhwa you like or even create a skill of your own.

This is the format for submitting in the comment section.

*Name*

*Rank*

*Description*

(If S Rank or above)

*Caution*

And it is cool if you make an unorthodox skill that has lower Ranking.

I won't select the skill based on power but their practical use.

(Well, if the skill is extremely cool like Natural Force in GOH, then maybe I will select more than one skills)

Bye!


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