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PLS UPDATE AUTHOR SAN. >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Don't want a good novel to be dropped (or it is already dropped)
Didn't really like the book. It was too chaotic. Unnecessary relationships. Broken plotline without any goal. Irritating. Even if the writing style was fine, plot was too forced. Tried reading it but got fed up after a few chapters. Still tried read further but had to drop. Sorry. Couldn't do it.
I looooved it its one of the best Naruto fanfics that i have ever read....i recomend it to anyone who likes Naruto especially those who get irritated seeing him naive or stupid cuz this Naruto is smart and when he is 13 he is already op
Be aware f*cking HAREM!!!! Otherwise it could have been a pretty decent story. If u are into that kind of stuff then... well it is not that bad.
It was initially good at the beginning, later on it is broken as the title implies. Really disappointing. I hope author corrects his mistakes.
Its harem.....😤 and the characters dont fit with their personalities in the original. Thats what ive observed from the first chapters. As most harems are trash i mean its realy disturbing and woild you share your man with someone else🙄 (its my opinion)im gonna kick all the harem lovers out there mhuahahahaha😇
Better than most naruto fanfic that ends romance in two-three lines, though mc is a bit stupid - knowing that he has nine-tails inside him he still leaves Konoha and thought nothing would happen, though enjoyable casual read this still has its moment of stupidity.
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This is an enjoyable Naruto fanfic. The writing quality had some problems in the beginning, but, the author really made an improvement on that regard. So kudos to the author! 😁 Aside from that, the story is pretty much how you would expect it to be, with little but significant deviation from the canon story. The MC is op and very apathetic about things around him unless it concern his harem. Haha. Atleast he is honest. Dialogue between chatacters is sort of bland and straight forward. But that is not really the reason why we read this sort of novel. Haha. Like I said, it is a very enjoyable read.
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Seems like this story is going on HIATUS...quite a shame. It was fun while it lasted. GJ Author for improving my mood a bit by reading something interesting. FAN-FICs are simly the best.
Great Story ....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................XD
This story is soooo good i feel that my brain was somehow not deteriorating and you can actually see a complex character with actual thoughts. OH Yahweh is the fan fiction genre evolving and both smart and intellectual people are writing such hidden gems.😄😍😍😍
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Definately going to put my power stones here dude, great naruto fan fic with different story line, i really looking forward to what happen next with this kind of naruto version, thanks dude
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I thought this is going to be a light hearten story due to the picture. Guess I should have pay more attention to the title. .................................................................................................................................................
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Great story nhhhvgjnbgfghjjhb👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🤩👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🤩🤩🤩👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
I have loved the story so far, it has great character development and the author adds his own twist in order to make this fan fiction his own. The story is turning out to be amazing and I can only ask for more.
Good start, but bad decisions on the sage thing. I know u can do it better author ther first chapter were pretty good, please keep working in this fanfic
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Really hope for this story to continue soon. A different approach for naruto fiction story really refreshing..do not take too long to complete this story.
PLS UPDATE AUTHOR SAN. >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Don't want a good novel to be dropped (or it is already dropped)
Didn't really like the book. It was too chaotic. Unnecessary relationships. Broken plotline without any goal. Irritating. Even if the writing style was fine, plot was too forced. Tried reading it but got fed up after a few chapters. Still tried read further but had to drop. Sorry. Couldn't do it.
I looooved it its one of the best Naruto fanfics that i have ever read....i recomend it to anyone who likes Naruto especially those who get irritated seeing him naive or stupid cuz this Naruto is smart and when he is 13 he is already op
Be aware f*cking HAREM!!!! Otherwise it could have been a pretty decent story. If u are into that kind of stuff then... well it is not that bad.
It was initially good at the beginning, later on it is broken as the title implies. Really disappointing. I hope author corrects his mistakes.
Its harem.....😤 and the characters dont fit with their personalities in the original. Thats what ive observed from the first chapters. As most harems are trash i mean its realy disturbing and woild you share your man with someone else🙄 (its my opinion)im gonna kick all the harem lovers out there mhuahahahaha😇
Better than most naruto fanfic that ends romance in two-three lines, though mc is a bit stupid - knowing that he has nine-tails inside him he still leaves Konoha and thought nothing would happen, though enjoyable casual read this still has its moment of stupidity.
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This is an enjoyable Naruto fanfic. The writing quality had some problems in the beginning, but, the author really made an improvement on that regard. So kudos to the author! 😁 Aside from that, the story is pretty much how you would expect it to be, with little but significant deviation from the canon story. The MC is op and very apathetic about things around him unless it concern his harem. Haha. Atleast he is honest. Dialogue between chatacters is sort of bland and straight forward. But that is not really the reason why we read this sort of novel. Haha. Like I said, it is a very enjoyable read.
揭示劇透 Don't mind me. ============================================================================================================== =======================================================
Seems like this story is going on HIATUS...quite a shame. It was fun while it lasted. GJ Author for improving my mood a bit by reading something interesting. FAN-FICs are simly the best.
Great Story ....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................XD
This story is soooo good i feel that my brain was somehow not deteriorating and you can actually see a complex character with actual thoughts. OH Yahweh is the fan fiction genre evolving and both smart and intellectual people are writing such hidden gems.😄😍😍😍
more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Definately going to put my power stones here dude, great naruto fan fic with different story line, i really looking forward to what happen next with this kind of naruto version, thanks dude
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I thought this is going to be a light hearten story due to the picture. Guess I should have pay more attention to the title. .................................................................................................................................................
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I have loved the story so far, it has great character development and the author adds his own twist in order to make this fan fiction his own. The story is turning out to be amazing and I can only ask for more.
Good start, but bad decisions on the sage thing. I know u can do it better author ther first chapter were pretty good, please keep working in this fanfic
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Really hope for this story to continue soon. A different approach for naruto fiction story really refreshing..do not take too long to complete this story.