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this was very interesting I had no idea what was going to happen but the main character of the story I don't know if he's a bad guy or a good guy but I think he just there. the knowledge he wants it's very interesting and the way his character develop over time it was very intriguing but I didn't even finish the story but it's already good enough for me I like this writing very much hope to see more from you.
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i think that this story is really good . for one it's original, the author made the effort to make a completely new world and I appreciate it but what's more , the mc is ruthless and evil i love this kind of mc because it's not like watching a show en or a zero to hero no here there is schemes betrayal and more in reality I wrote this review to gain exp
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One of the Best Fan-Fic Out There. I Especially Like the MC, not easily distracted by Skirts and Morality. Though a Bit narcissistic, the Guy has Not Gone Beyond a Single Planet and Has Already Concluded He's More Powerful Than The Universe Itself and now Has the Ability to Create His Own Reality, the MC Has Not Even Mastered Time and Space, Damn!!!.
This story is a wonderful one about one family who transcended the bounds of mortals and became the first vampires. It tells the story of one of these family members, a cold, calculating, and scheming one. The MC of this story is the literal example of the last boss, in which he controls the world from the shadows and experiments on people to discover things in both science and magic. The things that are bad with this story is the grammar, it could be a LOT better. But, if you can get past the grammar this story is an excellent one. If you like cold and emotionless/evil MC's then this story is for you.
I really liked the personality of the protagonist. Although he seems to be evil, all his actions do not carry malicious intent. An absolutely rational approach. He did not touch his family until they openly went against him and his plans. All for the highest good.
I don't usually write reviews in fact I never do, but I have to say this novel was a nice surprise. The Mc is a more f*cked up version of orochimaru, which is a feat within itself, there was always this feeling of wrongness through out the whole novel in regards to the Mc, he sometimes even feels inhumane, until he actually reaches that point. It's been difficult to find a decent fic in regards to the Originals/TVD universe and this fic is definitely great. Number of chapters may not seem like a lot, but trust me the word count for each chapter definitely makes up for it, so I wouldn't call it a short fic. There are some minor grammar mistakes, but it's definitely readable, all in all, if you're a fan of cold hearted ruthless Mc with god complex especially in the TVD universe you should read it. I for one enjoyed it.
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What the hell!!!!! It was perfect example of God syndrome. The protagonist had no empathy and next to no fellings. Protagonist was simply a maniac with power of a leach.
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A good story. But it suffers heavily from two things: Really bad pacing and a boring MC. 14 chapters in and the MC becomes the most powerful thing in the Universe. He's practically unkillable and nothing is stronger than him - and that's just with his physical prowess and without magic. He became too powerful and too quickly. I'd also like to say that the protagonist is as boring as a brick. Everything he does is calculated - he doesn't feel like anything more than some Original who wants strength and to be the perfect being. He's obsessed with knowledge and that's his only reason to exist. He's literally nothing more than that trait and it's boring to read about. He kills someone. What's the reason? It somehow helped him either grow in strength or gain knowledge. He makes a supernatural-version of the Illuminati. What's the reason? So he can have an information network that has it's fingers in all the pies available and lets the MC control the world from behind the scenes for--you guessed it--more information and power. Don't get me wrong, this story was good and quite interesting. But there's nothing more to it than a simple power-trip. All the MC does is look for more ways to gain power and information. It was fine when it was just a few chapters of that but 14 straight chapters of power-ups? That's a bit excessive. I'd be willing to ignore it as well if the characters were well-fleshed out and fun to read about. Or if there were good interactions in the first place. But no, there's no interesting dialogue between characters because the MC is just cold and uninterested in connecting with people. He doesn't even care about his family - not even when one of them dies. He's got the emotional range of a rock. Everything also seems to go his way and he has a contingency plan for everything. This is an interesting premise for a novel. Very much so. But the bad pacing and flat protagonist just mar this story too much for me, personally.
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Unica lamentela è il tempo di aggiornamento per il resto la storia è fantastica, interessante e molto coinvolgente, non ci si annoia mai se non durante il periodo fra un capitolo e l'altro.
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I really like this can you please continue it even though I don’t even no if your on this app still or not so can you please continue for a fan
I really enjoyed this and I hope you can continue to write it because this is my type of character and this is most impressive because of how he is
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God's syndrome! the only thing I agree with is knowledge, power, everything else is complete nonsense. He has no friends or family, he thinks that evolution applies to everyone lower than himself. Complete nonsense and why did he decide that he is god?
this was very interesting I had no idea what was going to happen but the main character of the story I don't know if he's a bad guy or a good guy but I think he just there. the knowledge he wants it's very interesting and the way his character develop over time it was very intriguing but I didn't even finish the story but it's already good enough for me I like this writing very much hope to see more from you.
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i think that this story is really good . for one it's original, the author made the effort to make a completely new world and I appreciate it but what's more , the mc is ruthless and evil i love this kind of mc because it's not like watching a show en or a zero to hero no here there is schemes betrayal and more in reality I wrote this review to gain exp
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One of the Best Fan-Fic Out There. I Especially Like the MC, not easily distracted by Skirts and Morality. Though a Bit narcissistic, the Guy has Not Gone Beyond a Single Planet and Has Already Concluded He's More Powerful Than The Universe Itself and now Has the Ability to Create His Own Reality, the MC Has Not Even Mastered Time and Space, Damn!!!.
This story is a wonderful one about one family who transcended the bounds of mortals and became the first vampires. It tells the story of one of these family members, a cold, calculating, and scheming one. The MC of this story is the literal example of the last boss, in which he controls the world from the shadows and experiments on people to discover things in both science and magic. The things that are bad with this story is the grammar, it could be a LOT better. But, if you can get past the grammar this story is an excellent one. If you like cold and emotionless/evil MC's then this story is for you.
I really liked the personality of the protagonist. Although he seems to be evil, all his actions do not carry malicious intent. An absolutely rational approach. He did not touch his family until they openly went against him and his plans. All for the highest good.
I don't usually write reviews in fact I never do, but I have to say this novel was a nice surprise. The Mc is a more f*cked up version of orochimaru, which is a feat within itself, there was always this feeling of wrongness through out the whole novel in regards to the Mc, he sometimes even feels inhumane, until he actually reaches that point. It's been difficult to find a decent fic in regards to the Originals/TVD universe and this fic is definitely great. Number of chapters may not seem like a lot, but trust me the word count for each chapter definitely makes up for it, so I wouldn't call it a short fic. There are some minor grammar mistakes, but it's definitely readable, all in all, if you're a fan of cold hearted ruthless Mc with god complex especially in the TVD universe you should read it. I for one enjoyed it.
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What the hell!!!!! It was perfect example of God syndrome. The protagonist had no empathy and next to no fellings. Protagonist was simply a maniac with power of a leach.
Grammar could be better 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140
A good story. But it suffers heavily from two things: Really bad pacing and a boring MC. 14 chapters in and the MC becomes the most powerful thing in the Universe. He's practically unkillable and nothing is stronger than him - and that's just with his physical prowess and without magic. He became too powerful and too quickly. I'd also like to say that the protagonist is as boring as a brick. Everything he does is calculated - he doesn't feel like anything more than some Original who wants strength and to be the perfect being. He's obsessed with knowledge and that's his only reason to exist. He's literally nothing more than that trait and it's boring to read about. He kills someone. What's the reason? It somehow helped him either grow in strength or gain knowledge. He makes a supernatural-version of the Illuminati. What's the reason? So he can have an information network that has it's fingers in all the pies available and lets the MC control the world from behind the scenes for--you guessed it--more information and power. Don't get me wrong, this story was good and quite interesting. But there's nothing more to it than a simple power-trip. All the MC does is look for more ways to gain power and information. It was fine when it was just a few chapters of that but 14 straight chapters of power-ups? That's a bit excessive. I'd be willing to ignore it as well if the characters were well-fleshed out and fun to read about. Or if there were good interactions in the first place. But no, there's no interesting dialogue between characters because the MC is just cold and uninterested in connecting with people. He doesn't even care about his family - not even when one of them dies. He's got the emotional range of a rock. Everything also seems to go his way and he has a contingency plan for everything. This is an interesting premise for a novel. Very much so. But the bad pacing and flat protagonist just mar this story too much for me, personally.
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I really like this can you please continue it even though I don’t even no if your on this app still or not so can you please continue for a fan
I really enjoyed this and I hope you can continue to write it because this is my type of character and this is most impressive because of how he is
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God's syndrome! the only thing I agree with is knowledge, power, everything else is complete nonsense. He has no friends or family, he thinks that evolution applies to everyone lower than himself. Complete nonsense and why did he decide that he is god?