Second Chance - To Live Again

LV 4

Nzoputa

The book is has potential. Although there are errors. Try to spread out your sentences and it would be advice to click enter twice when writing a new paragraph. Because your work is really clustered. Also, never start a sentence with small letters, use capital letters cause its the correct format of writing in English language. But generally, I liked the book, can't wait to see how it unfolds.

LV 5

MyCharacterLeads

Well, well, well, another good story out here..👍 Writing quality is quite good. (Easy to understand) The plot has a quite twist in the beginning, which is cool. (Thats why i give it a five) ✋ Characters design and world building lack details, might be because it has only few chapters. (Guess it will be develop slowly...) Overall, this an interesting one. Good job bringing her world into life.😊 Keep it up!👍

LV 10

Annejohn

To bad...to bad this story be dropped..it is very interesting story..mystery..ancient to modern..very powerful clan..still a lot to be exposed,we lost another best story.

LV 5

Aicha_Hamidou

Good story😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘 Needs editing 😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢

LV 11

abbiitotx

😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅Still wiating for the update.. Hehehhe.. 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁 pls update some moreeeeeee..

LV 5

ShinLyn

I like the story flows... It was interesting and good to read... It has a potential to be accepted to anyone... Though there are some errors but the author Va fix it anyway... So, I hope that it will continue and good job for providing us one of an interesting story...

LV 11

ryuxie

Exp😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

LV 10

michelle333

Took a chance and started to read this book. I'm glad I did the plot is good, character is easy to like and you are left wanting more. I gave five stars as I believe that this story can go far. Could be translated in to a t.v. Drama.

LV 11

chimel93

I like it, it does not feel completely cliche as other novels on the genre... Hope it continues like this. And the mcs are cute together That was my review now give me my sp 😂😂

LV 6

Anjiii

This novel can become really good, there are still errors in the writing especially in grammar, but don't let that stop you from reading. This is a novel of face slaps, a strong FL who can fight and a complex mess of family problems and rich people. Not only that, the schemes are crazy to the point of murdering one for wealth (cough *that mother of hers* cough). Mm, but everyone is scheming and Fu Ya is gonna need an army of loyal people to fight against all of them enemies.

LV 3

frogunicorn

I love the concept of this book. I like strong FL. Writing quality is ok. There are some mistakes but overall is good. The character and story are quite catchy. Like i said, I love strong FL. Seems there's mystery that needed to be solved like her past. I hope that will be explained. It's bad that she didn't get her revenge.😁

LV 3

tesareblindo

This book is interesting, it has a good revenge/face-slapping concept. The writing quality is okay and it is fun to read. The ML suits the FL well. The cover looks nice. Good job:)

LV 4

IceSnowball

This story is very interesting😊 I like the concept of transmigrating from the historical times to the modern times. I also like that the protagonist is not entirely clueless about the new world. She is also smart, good at martial arts and knows how to intimidate others. I really like this protagonist. The protagonist's traits and qualities (such as having a strong pride and being able to stay calm) make her a really likeable. The only part I find confusing is that the protagonist was still in a state of depression when she was in the historical world. After that, she quickly changed to someone who was strong and firm when it came to the modern world. It's understandable since she was only depressed because of her lover's 'death', but how did she fall in love with him when she is meant to be intelligent? I like how the relationship between the protagonist and her grandparents develop. It's really cool that the protagonist is a good actor😊. One minute she's coy and the next she is calm and indifferent. It's intriguing that so many people underestimate the protagonist, including her own bodyguard. Although there may be some errors regarding grammar,, this story is one of the most interesting out of the ones I have read.😊 I find sometimes that the tense is not correct Example: Chapter 14: 'causing the man seethed in rage' It might be easier to read if it was instead - 'causing the man to seethe in rage' There are a few places where the pronouns 'he' and 'she are mixed up. I feel that in Chapter 16, the way Director Chin greeted the protagonist was very familiar considering they hadn't met before. Suggestion: (chapter 16) '..."This must be Young Miss Fu?" Asked him, confirming...' - excerpt from the story. I feel that it would make more sense if it was: '..."This must be Young Miss Fu?" He asked, confirming...' Other than some minor mistakes, the writing quality is very good. This story is extremely interesting and engaging😊.

LV 3

K_A_U

Really interesting book, totally love it. The whole concept is extremely captivating, and the story line is enticing. Keep it up author, you are doing a great job. Can't wait to read more.

LV 4

PeachyPearl

Love is in the air... Is it love so far? Well I don't know just read and find cause "I'm a dangerous girl" haha I just loved a few dialogues... The writing style is good so far and the lingering humour in some places is quite evident in the words. I would like to recommend it to those who like romance with a sweet bickering. Keep it up author.

LV 4

chonnie

Alright. I am actually really into this! There's so much potential to this novel. I was thinking hard about what it is and I think it's because of the play on usual transmigration stories I read. Instead of it being someone from the present going into an alternate past, we see someone from the alternate past arrive into the present. It's a mixing pot of tropes (high society drama, transmigration, political issues [but that's so far just in like the first few chapters]) but I'm into it? The concept really hooked me not going to lie. The potential is definitely there. So, to the author: Kudos, good job! Really, I think your main issue is with spelling and transitions. I feel like you have a good grasp on how to describe your scenes, and it just needs a little polishing with an editor or proofreader friend. Maybe you should try Grammarly? It's not perfect all of the time but it's good enough to catch basic mistakes. There are some parts where the transition/timeline is abrupt (chapter 8 to chapter 9 is one place where I had to read back and double check if I missed something). Thank you for the story! All the love!!

LV 13

lumydee

I'm so amazed with the story...I'm already in love with it...just need more chapter's.....I'm really dying with anxiety....I give this novel a 5/5...its perfect 👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌❤❤❤❤❤❤

LV 5

RenuKakkar

I have just read the first chapter out of the 19 posted so far. The storyline seems to be interesting from the synopsis and the captivating 1st chapter. The time period of the story may kindly be mentioned so that one can picturise the characters in that era's getup, clothes wise, transport-wise, etc.

LV 4

Sapphirechelsea237

Amazing! It's so interesting! I love the stories with this genre and a kick-ass heroine! The writing quality is very good. I can't find any flaws. This story has a great potential! It's going straight to my library! Keep writing! :)

LV 12

PsyberRose

Overall, I like the story and where it's heading. Though, I am biased since this is the sort of genre and theme that I am partial to. (*⸰‿-) Writing Quality: Not perfect, but good enough not to distract me from reading it. English isn't my first language, thus the grammatical errors and punctuation mistakes do not bother me too much. Stability of Updates: 5* in good faith. Story Development: I like how the author is able to portray the past and the present, plus what is unfolding. The only thing I am perhaps sad about is that FL doesn't seem to be able to resolve her own grevience since she transmigrated to another world? Future? Character Design & World Background: Strong FL, cheeky ML. Always a good combination. Author manages to flesh them out nicely. A good novel with lots of potential. Added to library. All the best Author!