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I read this story when it was first being written to when it was finished. The author is Andur who published it on royalroadl.com along with all the other works that are connected with the book. The story is very interesting with quite a bit of humor and I believe it will draw you in, if not then the story is not for you.
This series has clearly been stolen. The original is on RoyalRoadLegends for free and is written by Andur. This upload here is theft. Andur is well known for refusing his series to be uploaded on other sites. Heck, you don't even credit him and you try to make this pass as a fanfic made by you.
Holy smokes! I remember this story! I haven't read this in years. I remember when Andur was still releasing chapters of this on RoyalRoad. Man, good times.
I read this story a long time ago and thought it was great. I hope you got permission to post it here. Anyway 5 stars just on nostalgia. For those of you who want to check out more of Andur's stories https://***.royalroad.com/profile/3091/fictions
This story really does deserve praise! The author does a good job at not only developing an interesting plot and characters but also making sure the story doesn’t get dry. The dynamic between the male and female leads is especially comical.
It's written by andur so i'll automatically give it 5 stars. 140 characters. Jajaksohcsoaozhsoaozuhsjsizixbdosoxjdbejoskabsochsnsoxhdnsisoxojabs
This story feels like a copy from story in RRL that I forgot the title even though I just read till Ch. 2 this 2 chapter made me remember that there's a story with this same settings in RRL (Royal Road Legend for those who don't know.).
Hmmmm then i still wait the next chapter release if i read it to the other site the i will finish it in one day and i don't want that to happen Sorry for my bad grammar
The story is good.and a little.bit hillarious about those two couple................... .................-_-------------_---------------
Very good story.,......................................................................................... ....... K
This story is very good i got hooked up from the start and im waiting about the development in this story Well anyway im always waiting the next chapter of this story i hope you have stable release of chapter 😊
It's by Andur From Royalroadl the man is still releasing more golden nuggets. go check it out. Do Not read it here. As Far As I know The Author Has Given permission to only to sites to publish his work, This is not one of them.
I read this story when it was first being written to when it was finished. The author is Andur who published it on royalroadl.com along with all the other works that are connected with the book. The story is very interesting with quite a bit of humor and I believe it will draw you in, if not then the story is not for you.
This series has clearly been stolen. The original is on RoyalRoadLegends for free and is written by Andur. This upload here is theft. Andur is well known for refusing his series to be uploaded on other sites. Heck, you don't even credit him and you try to make this pass as a fanfic made by you.
Holy smokes! I remember this story! I haven't read this in years. I remember when Andur was still releasing chapters of this on RoyalRoad. Man, good times.
I read this story a long time ago and thought it was great. I hope you got permission to post it here. Anyway 5 stars just on nostalgia. For those of you who want to check out more of Andur's stories https://***.royalroad.com/profile/3091/fictions
This story really does deserve praise! The author does a good job at not only developing an interesting plot and characters but also making sure the story doesn’t get dry. The dynamic between the male and female leads is especially comical.
It's written by andur so i'll automatically give it 5 stars. 140 characters. Jajaksohcsoaozhsoaozuhsjsizixbdosoxjdbejoskabsochsnsoxhdnsisoxojabs
This story feels like a copy from story in RRL that I forgot the title even though I just read till Ch. 2 this 2 chapter made me remember that there's a story with this same settings in RRL (Royal Road Legend for those who don't know.).
Hmmmm then i still wait the next chapter release if i read it to the other site the i will finish it in one day and i don't want that to happen Sorry for my bad grammar
The story is good.and a little.bit hillarious about those two couple................... .................-_-------------_---------------
Very good story.,......................................................................................... ....... K
This story is very good i got hooked up from the start and im waiting about the development in this story Well anyway im always waiting the next chapter of this story i hope you have stable release of chapter 😊
It's by Andur From Royalroadl the man is still releasing more golden nuggets. go check it out. Do Not read it here. As Far As I know The Author Has Given permission to only to sites to publish his work, This is not one of them.