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You did read the manga right? Susifskz socafhsz dnsrx c bdbxbxbcbc d dbdb d dbcf fhf f cjc r dbcr t ffnjf F f f Fnf fbf x S
LOVE THE NEW BOOK! I was wondering why you hadn’t been updating for a wile. Now I see why. The only problem is... I NEED MORE CHAPTERS!
Thank....................................................................................................................................you
everything is good bad poor character development 22222222222²25255555665588858555856982885858588556985958524585685875582858828752852855285657
Type your review here. Please write your review as detailed as you can. Your review would be very important to the story (at least 140 characters).
Eu estive procurando por um bom fanfic de Hunter X Hunter, por favor não caia ................................ ... ................................... ............ ....................... ........................... ........ ...................................
It was certainly a good approach to the story especially when you didn’t let him learn nen early on by some miracle learn it by himself /////////////://////////////////:////////////////////;
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ok i do like the story Writing Quality is like a 3.5. Stability of Updates is a 2 sense the author is only doing 2 chaps a week. Story Development is like a 2.5 its nice and all but the why you describe the story just it feels like it lacking. i think i could be worked on it some more and it would be better so i think is like a 3.1. Character Design its about like a 3.6 i still fill its lacking at some pots but still good just need some work i would say. World Background as scene their is not much info for it i would give a 4 for now. would still like to see the author is improve.
It's cool keep it up...............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Review for Continue writing and we pray to not drop or hiatus ..........................................................................................................................................
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揭示劇透 Nice Story and we need more more more more more more more more moremore more more moremore more more moremore more more moremore more more more Chapter XD
What is your upload schedule? This is a really promising series. I like to drop some more power stones in then. ........................………………...……………...……………………......……………...
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A very interesting story please keep it up and more chapters please...................................... .........................................................................
I’ve been looking for a good fanfic of Hunter X Hunter please don’t drop................................... ................................... ................................... ................................... ...................................
So far so good. Very interesting hope to see a slow and whole story :) To bad it's not your primary novel Then we would get more chapters. :P
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I give 5 stars cuz the story is interesting........... ........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................keep your hard work and thank you
Great novel. Keep going man...................................................................................................................................................
Very good start to a novel I hope you keep up the good work because most hunter x hunter fan-fic are dropped which makes me sad because hunter x hunter is my favorite anime.
This is a amazing novel I love the characters the personality of the characters The background the setting and everything about this novel I love it all and it’s amazing and can’t wait to read more when it updates I will only give up on this novel when they put the tag dropped on it
You did read the manga right? Susifskz socafhsz dnsrx c bdbxbxbcbc d dbdb d dbcf fhf f cjc r dbcr t ffnjf F f f Fnf fbf x S
LOVE THE NEW BOOK! I was wondering why you hadn’t been updating for a wile. Now I see why. The only problem is... I NEED MORE CHAPTERS!
Thank....................................................................................................................................you
everything is good bad poor character development 22222222222²25255555665588858555856982885858588556985958524585685875582858828752852855285657
Type your review here. Please write your review as detailed as you can. Your review would be very important to the story (at least 140 characters).
Eu estive procurando por um bom fanfic de Hunter X Hunter, por favor não caia ................................ ... ................................... ............ ....................... ........................... ........ ...................................
It was certainly a good approach to the story especially when you didn’t let him learn nen early on by some miracle learn it by himself /////////////://////////////////:////////////////////;
揭示劇透 ok i do like the story Writing Quality is like a 3.5. Stability of Updates is a 2 sense the author is only doing 2 chaps a week. Story Development is like a 2.5 its nice and all but the why you describe the story just it feels like it lacking. i think i could be worked on it some more and it would be better so i think is like a 3.1. Character Design its about like a 3.6 i still fill its lacking at some pots but still good just need some work i would say. World Background as scene their is not much info for it i would give a 4 for now. would still like to see the author is improve.
It's cool keep it up...............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Review for Continue writing and we pray to not drop or hiatus ..........................................................................................................................................
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揭示劇透 Nice Story and we need more more more more more more more more moremore more more moremore more more moremore more more moremore more more more Chapter XD
What is your upload schedule? This is a really promising series. I like to drop some more power stones in then. ........................………………...……………...……………………......……………...
(ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧ ✧ﾟ･: *ヽ(◕ヮ◕ヽ) (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧ ✧ﾟ･: *ヽ(◕ヮ◕ヽ) (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧ ✧ﾟ･: *ヽ(◕ヮ◕ヽ) (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧ ✧ﾟ･: *ヽ(◕ヮ◕ヽ) (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧ ✧ﾟ･: *ヽ(◕ヮ◕ヽ) (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧ ✧ﾟ･: *ヽ(◕ヮ◕ヽ)
A very interesting story please keep it up and more chapters please...................................... .........................................................................
I’ve been looking for a good fanfic of Hunter X Hunter please don’t drop................................... ................................... ................................... ................................... ...................................
So far so good. Very interesting hope to see a slow and whole story :) To bad it's not your primary novel Then we would get more chapters. :P
Tiene potencial no lo dejes amigo XP XXP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP P XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP
I give 5 stars cuz the story is interesting........... ........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................keep your hard work and thank you
Great novel. Keep going man...................................................................................................................................................
Very good start to a novel I hope you keep up the good work because most hunter x hunter fan-fic are dropped which makes me sad because hunter x hunter is my favorite anime.
This is a amazing novel I love the characters the personality of the characters The background the setting and everything about this novel I love it all and it’s amazing and can’t wait to read more when it updates I will only give up on this novel when they put the tag dropped on it