Seion Sect

LV 5

shnizel

I am a fan for all your novels. Is it possible for you to do a crossover like mc with the powers of "Seven Deadly Sins" in highschool dxd? Thanks No pressure peace out!

LV 6

TFH

Well... First of all, I'm most impressed by the author ability to incorporate the already existing lore and characters into his Fan Fiction novels of One-piece, HXD, Fairy Tail, Bleach, naruto, and STB. It's amazing seeing you take SOOO many different things and mix them together and make it work. Now about the thing, you can improve... 1 and the biggest issue.. IS GRAMMAR... you keep using him for a female, her for a male, wrong use of no use of comas, some redaction issues, and wrongly placed words. 2.- While this is personal taste... I don't know what you wanted by adding fisting or other things but I guess that's your take on those, you can improve on your ero chapters as well. I believe i already posted a comment speaking about the grammar, but i will say it again that you can find multiple, such as "grammarly". which you install on your internet browser to use and it's easy to use while writing on google drive word sheets. I have enjoyed reading all those novels but if i must give a score it would be 5 or 6 out of 10 instead of 9/10 only due to grammar issues. I believe it would be extremely helpful for you to even take some free online courses on how to write correctly in English so that you can at least reach intermediate and you drastically reduce the number of errors you have. IT WILL HELP YOU FIND JOB FASTER too... as most of the time, people will hire employees who have decent english.

LV 14

WebReaderPub

are the novels about dxd, naruto and one piece completed? also from what i read you completed the bleach novel you should change the status to completed or it will seem like a novel you dropped and right now i'm not sure if you dropped dxd, naruto or one piece

LV 5

Blue_Sovereign

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LV 2

Immadropitall

Don't bother. Trash-Fic writer. This is my honest opinion. You are not a good FanFic writer. Your stories all focus on a Harem-Seeking MC, which is fine. However, the said MC is too arrogant from a normal person just recieves powers and becomes a jêrk. Oh well, there are still readers who like your works anyway just wanted to let out some steam about how awful your novels truly are.

LV 3

Gerez

What happened to Seion? ............................................................ ............................................................

LV 11

ThatsClassified

Seion, you gotta be one of the best fanfiction authors, at least top 15, though there are some grammatical errors, your stories are still better than some of these people that just copy off Chinese novels and take credit

LV 6

VMoto

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LV 4

En_busca_de_harem

No puedo expresar con palabras lo crack que eres jajajaja mandando alv alos que critican tus novelas después de que comprenden que no pueden hacerte cambiar de opinión se ban jajajaja