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5 star just because I hate all the System novels, every System make the life fucking dumb IQ -100 level, even so, the MC will be annoyed at how difficult pressing a button its, they won a ability from the System and are more powerful than someone that train his body and mind over decades, that is sheeeet!
Well i read the latest chapter and ill say it is a good story And the realistic theme of it keep it up ill be tuning in for more ....peace ✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️
Obviously need to give myself five stars. Except for the chapter frequency. I know that'll be random for the most part. I hope to help Ren achieve his dreams if reliving a glorious age of swords and politics to make his way to the top an di hope you all enjoy the journey
Shameless Author here, with a shameless review. I wrote a novel recently, which is Call of Ring. It was my very first attempt at writing, and there may be some mistakes and errors in it, but I still feel extremely proud of it and enjoy it thoroughly. Please give my story a try and leave some comments for me. Thank you! https://rb.gy/5s05wc
ME NEED MOAARRR!!!!!!ME NEED MOAARRR!!!!!!ME NEED MOAARRR!!!!!!ME NEED MOAARRR!!!!!!ME NEED MOAARRR!!!!!!ME NEED MOAARRR!!!!!!ME NEED MOAARRR!!!!!!ME NEED MOAARRR!!!!!!
5 star just because I hate all the System novels, every System make the life fucking dumb IQ -100 level, even so, the MC will be annoyed at how difficult pressing a button its, they won a ability from the System and are more powerful than someone that train his body and mind over decades, that is sheeeet!
Well i read the latest chapter and ill say it is a good story And the realistic theme of it keep it up ill be tuning in for more ....peace ✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️
Obviously need to give myself five stars. Except for the chapter frequency. I know that'll be random for the most part. I hope to help Ren achieve his dreams if reliving a glorious age of swords and politics to make his way to the top an di hope you all enjoy the journey
Shameless Author here, with a shameless review. I wrote a novel recently, which is Call of Ring. It was my very first attempt at writing, and there may be some mistakes and errors in it, but I still feel extremely proud of it and enjoy it thoroughly. Please give my story a try and leave some comments for me. Thank you! https://rb.gy/5s05wc