章節 100: A sounding kiss
"Move" Bodyguard literally yelled causing her to jump a step back.
Before she could leave from there in disappointment, she heard the loud scolding voice of Feng Dingxiong's assistant, "What the hell is this? Can't you check the car before? How can it break down suddenly? What should I say to the boss?" he was yelling at the chauffeur.
'TING'
Alice's mind struck an idea. Raising her right hand up in the air, she said enthusiastically at a high pitch, "Me Me Me… I can fix this car"
All the heads turn to the direction of the voice. Feng Dingxiong's assistant scanned her from top to bottom. He said politely, "Miss. Please go from here. There's nothing you can help us with" He took out his phone to arrange for another car.
創作者的想法 
dream_ash
dream_ash In the flashback, I try to include the thoughts and observation of Xiu Mei only, as this is her flashback.
The thoughts of FJ and FD during that time cannot be told from her perspective., cause she herself doesn't know.
Similarly while writing FJ's flashback I made sure not to include Alice's thought's...
Whereas as an author I narrate the body languages of the people around her to make the clear picture for my readers....
I hope you enjoyed this snippet of their past...
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