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Good story, I hope you can continue the story. thank you dear writer please don't give up i look forward to your return.🙏👍🙏👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🙏🙏👍👍🙏👍👍👍👍👍🙏👍🙏👍👍👍👍🙏👍
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So u are one of those author who ruin the meaning of fanfic ehh. I am just read 2 ch and i know where the plot is going. Fanfic mean is better version of original while u are truly follow the original too much even the mc is trash. U know tang san is innate talent even his spirit esence is trash while this mc is has unknown spirit and his spirit level only 1. And u said that mc like stuning heaven? Hahahah totaly like chinese author type. Trash mc start and become king later, Truly unreasonable.
Damn that good. thanks for hard work I love douluo dalu this fan fiction is very nice work hehehe. Sorry my English is not good.please don't drop this one I like it very much.don't drop this one I like it very much.don't drop this one I like it very much
Story seems decent at the start cause its basically a dd story with a more mature mc,go figures since its a reincarnated individual nothing new there.His spirits are how do i say..weird and not interesting tbh borderline trolling.He has knowledge of the world but abuses it when he has no protection which seems stupid.His mother was almost killed thus he left like the original plot develop but with a plus of his father coming back and getting his mother's forgiveness easily which people are not happy with.Author could have change the plot in any way to make it better but he decided to change the one fact everyone was fine with,which was that his father not coming back. So if you want a DD fanfic with a weird spirit plus a mc who has a fetish of showing off his knowledge when he has no protection of his own then you have yourself this novel.Be warned though it isnt a wish fulfillment more of the mc being used and thrown around.
me pregunto a donde ira la historia a este punto y los desafios que podria haber estoy muy preocupadom al respecto ya que parece que no habra un gran avance en la historia y este podria ser facilmente manejado por OPcness del MC
I like it so its perfect rating ...........................👍............... .........................👍................. .......................👍...................
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Any dd2 fanfic gets 5 ....................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Keep it up bro and my many many thanks. There are too many fanfiction for DD1 but very rare for DD2 please dont drop my vote are for u and lots of thanks. Try also for intent training for weapons and sooner of soul spirits i really enjoy your work please make it to end and no newd to follow the real story events 100 percent. Good luck
I like how the MC was always intelligent and not given his intelligence by some God that always gives MCs intelligence when reincarnated or from some system given to them that increases there intelligence, or gamer power. This MC is great, hella strong, but his intelligence really stands out. Not like other MCs that have a screw loose and although they are given intelligence, they are still pretty stupid.
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Hohoho, finaly dd 2 fanfic, i still waiting this novel, please update more !?!!!!! More !!!!!! More !!!!!! More !!!!! More '!!!!!! More !!!?!!!!!!!!!
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The frequency of the release should be regular and will be all good. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
finally another dd fanfic dont add harem anymore, so far the story still good, please release more chapter cant wait to read more and also make sure to not mc become a dumbass character .
I really like how you chose Douluo Dalu 2 and brought it up to a more technological advance through not relying on spirit power. Im not that happy about daydream and Electrolux 😭😢. I appreciate what you’ve done with this fan doc though and all the effort you put into it. Thank you for all of your creativity and time you invested into this. I look forward to more great chapters. 🤩😁☺️🤗
Good story, I hope you can continue the story. thank you dear writer please don't give up i look forward to your return.🙏👍🙏👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🙏🙏👍👍🙏👍👍👍👍👍🙏👍🙏👍👍👍👍🙏👍
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So u are one of those author who ruin the meaning of fanfic ehh. I am just read 2 ch and i know where the plot is going. Fanfic mean is better version of original while u are truly follow the original too much even the mc is trash. U know tang san is innate talent even his spirit esence is trash while this mc is has unknown spirit and his spirit level only 1. And u said that mc like stuning heaven? Hahahah totaly like chinese author type. Trash mc start and become king later, Truly unreasonable.
Damn that good. thanks for hard work I love douluo dalu this fan fiction is very nice work hehehe. Sorry my English is not good.please don't drop this one I like it very much.don't drop this one I like it very much.don't drop this one I like it very much
Story seems decent at the start cause its basically a dd story with a more mature mc,go figures since its a reincarnated individual nothing new there.His spirits are how do i say..weird and not interesting tbh borderline trolling.He has knowledge of the world but abuses it when he has no protection which seems stupid.His mother was almost killed thus he left like the original plot develop but with a plus of his father coming back and getting his mother's forgiveness easily which people are not happy with.Author could have change the plot in any way to make it better but he decided to change the one fact everyone was fine with,which was that his father not coming back. So if you want a DD fanfic with a weird spirit plus a mc who has a fetish of showing off his knowledge when he has no protection of his own then you have yourself this novel.Be warned though it isnt a wish fulfillment more of the mc being used and thrown around.
me pregunto a donde ira la historia a este punto y los desafios que podria haber estoy muy preocupadom al respecto ya que parece que no habra un gran avance en la historia y este podria ser facilmente manejado por OPcness del MC
I like it so its perfect rating ...........................👍............... .........................👍................. .......................👍...................
Is a god fanfiction Is a god fanfictionIs a god fanfictionIs a god fanfiction Is a god fanfictionIs a god fanfictionIs a god fanfiction Is a god fanfiction Is a god fanfiction
More more more more more more more ...good ver y good ...more more ...más más mañana mama maman doodulo 2 mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas
MEH MEH MEH MEH MEH MEH MEH MEH MEH MEH MEH MEH MEH MEH MEH MEH MEH MEH MEH MEH MEH MEH MEH MEH MEH MEH MEH MEH MEH MEH MEH MEH MEH MEH MEH MEH MEH MEH MEH MEH MEH MEH
Any dd2 fanfic gets 5 ....................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Keep it up bro and my many many thanks. There are too many fanfiction for DD1 but very rare for DD2 please dont drop my vote are for u and lots of thanks. Try also for intent training for weapons and sooner of soul spirits i really enjoy your work please make it to end and no newd to follow the real story events 100 percent. Good luck
I like how the MC was always intelligent and not given his intelligence by some God that always gives MCs intelligence when reincarnated or from some system given to them that increases there intelligence, or gamer power. This MC is great, hella strong, but his intelligence really stands out. Not like other MCs that have a screw loose and although they are given intelligence, they are still pretty stupid.
I found a gem a gem a gem a gem is a gem a gem a gem a gem is a gem a gem a gem a gem is a gem a gem a gem a gem is a gem a gem a gem a gem is a gem a gem a gem a gem is a gem a gem a gem a gem is a gem a gem a gem a gem is a gem a gem a gem a gem is a gem a gem a gem a gem is a gem a gem a gem a gem is a gem a gem a gem a gem!
Hohoho, finaly dd 2 fanfic, i still waiting this novel, please update more !?!!!!! More !!!!!! More !!!!!! More !!!!! More '!!!!!! More !!!?!!!!!!!!!
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揭示劇透 udate update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuupdate update update update
The frequency of the release should be regular and will be all good. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
finally another dd fanfic dont add harem anymore, so far the story still good, please release more chapter cant wait to read more and also make sure to not mc become a dumbass character .
I really like how you chose Douluo Dalu 2 and brought it up to a more technological advance through not relying on spirit power. Im not that happy about daydream and Electrolux 😭😢. I appreciate what you’ve done with this fan doc though and all the effort you put into it. Thank you for all of your creativity and time you invested into this. I look forward to more great chapters. 🤩😁☺️🤗