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Ok so far story is great! And waits for more but I think Hermione should also become a Devil and part of Harry house. But this is your story and you need to take this story the way you see it not the way anyone says.
Its not nii-chan or Onii-chan. Nii means brother. Onee means sister. Onee-sama is what sona calls her sister. She doesn't call her chan or san.
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Ok so far story is great! And waits for more but I think Hermione should also become a Devil and part of Harry house. But this is your story and you need to take this story the way you see it not the way anyone says.
Its not nii-chan or Onii-chan. Nii means brother. Onee means sister. Onee-sama is what sona calls her sister. She doesn't call her chan or san.
Boa historia, ...............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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Very Good, Just wished it was updated more