Reviews of Zzzzz by Indie131998 - Webnovel

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3.2

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Kaguya_otsutsuki

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Yuukidelarosa

It made me curious about this story just to know it was drop. "Blag" I wonder what this story about? Well who knows? I wanna read the author narutos story. I wonder where I can find it?

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Shiksha_Jerath

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JohnnyD

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JohnnyD

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JohnnyD

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385749220233

Lier said will update but didn't, **** you V V C C C C C C C F D S S W W F G G.t.tjejduswijwshhsyshdgssdjdhdjdsjhehsshdhbbdbb Shsbzhhsjswkwkw

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God_Of_All

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HTred
LV 5 Badge

Well nice start, a female lead in action (Lol more like in explosion...oh i want to see deidara's face). Will read when there are more chapters.

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Dio_The_Sage

Idk what to say cuz this is just the start so 5 star for now xD and add naruto, deidara, soi fon i guess(cuz her bankai is basically a nuke) ,nagumo hajime? (from novel named arifureta....) ,and idk xD

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MashedPotato39

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OnePun

Japan got a walking talking nuke that is actually cute. I hope this one will be another masterpiece. Good luck with the explosion. Don't blow anymore banks. . . . . . Explosion. I think you got the idea from Deidara.

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playboycupu

I hope you success with new novel but sadly i cant read novel with female as protagonist... And dont dropped the other novel bro.................

6yr
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Exp_Miner

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Kaguya_otsutsuki

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Yuukidelarosa

It made me curious about this story just to know it was drop. "Blag" I wonder what this story about? Well who knows? I wanna read the author narutos story. I wonder where I can find it?

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Shiksha_Jerath

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JohnnyD

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JohnnyD

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JohnnyD

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385749220233

Zero update **** author Shsbzhhsjswkwkw behind hiding banned hehehehe mannishness nondisjunction hsshhssjjsj mannishness Manassas ndndndnndnsskakaakananajannsnsn ndndndnndnsskakaakananajannsnsn

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385749220233

Lier said will update but didn't, **** you V V C C C C C C C F D S S W W F G G.t.tjejduswijwshhsyshdgssdjdhdjdsjhehsshdhbbdbb Shsbzhhsjswkwkw

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God_Of_All

ART IS AN EXPLOSION!!!!!! ART IS AN EXPLOSION!!!!!! ART IS AN EXPLOSION!!!!!! ART IS AN EXPLOSION!!!!!! ART IS AN EXPLOSION!!!!!! ART IS AN EXPLOSION!!!!!! ART IS AN EXPLOSION!!!!!! ART IS AN EXPLOSION!!!!!! ART IS AN EXPLOSION!!!!!! ART IS AN EXPLOSION!!!!!! ART IS AN EXPLOSION!!!!!! ART IS AN EXPLOSION!!!!!! ART IS AN EXPLOSION!!!!!! ART IS AN EXPLOSION!!!!!! ART IS AN EXPLOSION!!!!!! ART IS AN EXPLOSION!!!!!! ART IS AN EXPLOSION!!!!!! ART IS AN EXPLOSION!!!!!!

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HTred
LV 5 Badge

Well nice start, a female lead in action (Lol more like in explosion...oh i want to see deidara's face). Will read when there are more chapters.

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Dio_The_Sage

Idk what to say cuz this is just the start so 5 star for now xD and add naruto, deidara, soi fon i guess(cuz her bankai is basically a nuke) ,nagumo hajime? (from novel named arifureta....) ,and idk xD

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MashedPotato39

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OnePun

Japan got a walking talking nuke that is actually cute. I hope this one will be another masterpiece. Good luck with the explosion. Don't blow anymore banks. . . . . . Explosion. I think you got the idea from Deidara.

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playboycupu

I hope you success with new novel but sadly i cant read novel with female as protagonist... And dont dropped the other novel bro.................

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Exp_Miner

One application for exp sect. Qualification : EXP sect fan. Motto: I will earn exp everyday without fail.

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