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is your mc female or male ....................................................................................................................................
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Female MC isnt my type of book...but credit where credit is due..your **** is dope...longs chps thats legible and structured well...MC isnt nuts or retarded..with a proper plot.....and soo soooo many chps...goodshow....whilst I dont like it ....hopefully more people will find this and enjoy it...anyway goodluck
LV 5 ![Badge]()
is your mc female or male ....................................................................................................................................
Female MC isnt my type of book...but credit where credit is due..your **** is dope...longs chps thats legible and structured well...MC isnt nuts or retarded..with a proper plot.....and soo soooo many chps...goodshow....whilst I dont like it ....hopefully more people will find this and enjoy it...anyway goodluck