摘要
Everyone has a chooses in life. One my be delt cards of hardship while other are delt more powerful cards. Beth and Sarah were both delt a low hand in life but they choose to rise above and fight. While Alex and Jack were delt a better hand they too have chosen to stay strong and lead a good fight for the new life they are looking at. Can they get and keep the girls or will they lose to an underhanded deck of players that chose to tear apart their world... The choose is mine and...It's up to me.
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Good one ... This is one fast pacing story.....!!!! Thur who love short stories can give this a try 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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the story is siMple and beautiful... I wish that the action parts were described as the RomaNtic parts were described... we know its planned but when it happens its too fast like a summary... but i loved it... ♥️
I thought this story was pretty good. It kept me interested from the beginning. It had some plot twists that made it even better. There were minor grammar mistakes but nothing too bad that took away from the story. Good job author.
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- 1 The beginning(revised) 5 years ago
- 2 Job hunting(Revised) 5 years ago
- 3 Meeting the Boss(Revised) 5 years ago
- 4 Moving in(Revised) 5 years ago
- 5 Meeting the Madame 5 years ago
- 6 Getting fired 5 years ago
- 7 Heartbroken 5 years ago
- 8 Hope 5 years ago
- 9 Run in fate 5 years ago
- 10 Black's new plan 5 years ago
- 11 Cuddle time 5 years ago
- 12 Lilly is back 5 years ago
- 13 Finding you new Bff 5 years ago
- 14 Close call 5 years ago
- 15 Family catchup 5 years ago
- 16 Lilly's plan starts 5 years ago
- 17 Need to be close 5 years ago
- 18 Time to plan 5 years ago
- 19 Next choice 5 years ago
- 20 Night to remember 5 years ago
- 21 Past Choices 5 years ago
- 22 Now Choices 5 years ago
- 23 Time for a plan 5 years ago
- 24 Government cover 5 years ago
- 25 Rattatouilleknight vs OgreKing 5 years ago
- 26 Make up(X rated chapter skip if you don't like this kind of read) 5 years ago
- 27 part2(X rated chapter skip if you don't like this kind of read) 5 years ago
- 28 Getting plan down 5 years ago
- 29 Day to ready 5 years ago
- 30 Sarah's convicting(passionate text) 5 years ago
- 31 Sarah's Convicting 2(passionate Text) 5 years ago
- 32 Black's down fall. 5 years ago
- 33 Fall of the Sky 5 years ago
- 34 Falling threw the Sky 5 years ago
- 35 Marriage Announcement 5 years ago
- 36 Getting ready 5 years ago
- 37 Spy in my phone 5 years ago
- 38 I do 5 years ago
- 39 Party the night away 5 years ago
- 40 The Planning 5 years ago
- 41 The rat chases the weasel 5 years ago
- 42 Jack is an A#$(strong contents) 5 years ago
- 43 Jack part two(Strong content) 5 years ago
- 44 Party planning 5 years ago
- 45 Getting to know you 5 years ago
- 46 Jewels in the Sky 5 years ago
- 47 Finding Skyler 5 years ago
- 48 Big Daddy Godfather to the rescue. 5 years ago
- 49 Baby shower 5 years ago
- 50 Life in a coma. 5 years ago
- 51 Sarah's Stepdad (strong contact) 5 years ago
- 52 Skyler Work out. 5 years ago
- 53 Surching for Sarah 5 years ago
- 54 Reunited 5 years ago
- 55 Reunited part 2 5 years ago
- 56 Baby suprise 5 years ago
- 57 Popping the question 5 years ago
- 58 Keeping up the the kidos 5 years ago
- 59 Wedding of Jack and Sarah 5 years ago
- 60 Black Market Baby 5 years ago
- 61 FBI on the case. 5 years ago
- 62 Protecting the Family. 5 years ago
- 63 Feeling like everything is lost. 5 years ago
- 64 Citywide City 5 years ago
- 65 Connecting with Beth 5 years ago
- 66 Sky's Jewel 5 years ago
Greatly story..... Unexpected I liked it... storyline very good smoothly and enjoying to read.... thanks you author..... yours job very great 👍👍👍👍💝💝💝💝