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Thank you all so much for the views!!! 12k and hopefully more to come!!! I feel so grateful to you guys...I just do hope most of you really likes my story hehe...once again thank you so much!!! Feel so loved 😍😍😍
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Please please please please please please please please please please update as quick as you can..........please pretty please please please with cherry on top!!!!!!!!!
I do hope it would be more interesting.........excited for the next chapters to come...........❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
(♡˙︶˙♡)L(*OεV*)E～(^з^)-♡(๑♡∀♡๑)（*＾3＾）/～♡◌⑅⃝●♡⋆♡LOVE♡⋆♡●⑅◌Σ>―(〃°ω°〃)♡→♪ ♬ ヾ(´︶`♡)ﾉ ♬ ♪⁄(⁄ ⁄•⁄ω⁄•⁄ ⁄)⁄♪☆＼(^０^＼) ♪(／^-^)／☆♪＼(*＾▽＾*)／＼(*＾▽＾*)／I am really looking forward for the next chapter!!!!!!!!!
I like it. It's new and interesting. Keep up the good work. You'll keep learning while you keep writing I would say...first story is always the hardest took get by.............
I'm not sure my opinion would be good...I don't know how to write a story so I don't know what to advice you...but keep it up! Hoping you would get the progress you want...
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
Thank you all so much for the views!!! 12k and hopefully more to come!!! I feel so grateful to you guys...I just do hope most of you really likes my story hehe...once again thank you so much!!! Feel so loved 😍😍😍
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♪☆＼(^０^＼) ♪(／^-^)／☆♪＼(*＾▽＾*)／＼(*＾▽＾*)／♡⃛◟( ˊ̱˂˃ˋ̱ )◞⸜₍ ˍ́˱˲ˍ̀ ₎⸝◟( ˊ̱˂˃ˋ̱ )◞♡⃛⁄(⁄ ⁄•⁄ω⁄•⁄ ⁄)⁄♪ ♬ ヾ(´︶`♡)ﾉ ♬ ♪Σ>―(〃°ω°〃)♡→◌⑅⃝●♡⋆♡LOVE♡⋆♡●⑅◌◌⑅⃝●♡⋆♡LOVE♡⋆♡●⑅◌◌⑅⃝●♡⋆♡LOVE♡⋆♡●⑅◌◌⑅⃝●♡⋆♡LOVE♡⋆♡●⑅◌◌⑅⃝●♡⋆♡LOVE♡⋆♡●⑅◌◌⑅⃝●♡⋆♡LOVE♡⋆♡●⑅◌◌⑅⃝●♡⋆♡LOVE♡⋆♡●⑅◌
Please please please please please please please please please please update as quick as you can..........please pretty please please please with cherry on top!!!!!!!!!
I do hope it would be more interesting.........excited for the next chapters to come...........❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
(♡˙︶˙♡)L(*OεV*)E～(^з^)-♡(๑♡∀♡๑)（*＾3＾）/～♡◌⑅⃝●♡⋆♡LOVE♡⋆♡●⑅◌Σ>―(〃°ω°〃)♡→♪ ♬ ヾ(´︶`♡)ﾉ ♬ ♪⁄(⁄ ⁄•⁄ω⁄•⁄ ⁄)⁄♪☆＼(^０^＼) ♪(／^-^)／☆♪＼(*＾▽＾*)／＼(*＾▽＾*)／I am really looking forward for the next chapter!!!!!!!!!
I like it. It's new and interesting. Keep up the good work. You'll keep learning while you keep writing I would say...first story is always the hardest took get by.............
I'm not sure my opinion would be good...I don't know how to write a story so I don't know what to advice you...but keep it up! Hoping you would get the progress you want...
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.