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Ok, this is by far the best ‘adult’ Pokemon ff so far. I’m usually not a huge fan of harems, but it’s done very well here with the romance theme blending in well into the story. The characters are portrayed well. The story progression and writing quality are awesome. Definitely worth a read!
It's an amazing story, no doubt about it. A transmigration with harem subplot, with a good plot. Not many Pokemon stories can beat this in this genre.
Me encantó de principio a fin, bueno talvez hable desde mi adicción a este tipo de historias pero el mundo los tonos sus matices enserio seguire esperando semana a semana cada actualización
Amazing story A story about Ace Ketchum, a reincarnation, slowly building himself and dominating the Pokemon world. The characters and the interactions are amazing to read.
This is a fantastic Pokémon novel the story is great it has lots of twists and turns people you love and hate etc. Also, I feel like the Author does the romance and harem very well!
It's an amazing story, with good plot, world building, humour and OP moments. The protagonist(SI) is a older twin of Ash, on his journey to greatness.
Genial me encanta esta historia en especial como ya llegando a los últimos capítulos se vuelve bastante oscuro con todo lo del equipo rocket quiero mas capítulos !!
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This is the best Pokemon fanfiction I have ever read. although it only updates a few chapters a month, which is quite a shame in my opinion. but this is better than just one chapter every month, and the number of words in each chapter is also quite large, so in my opinion, the shortcomings of this fanfiction can be ignored. I hope you don't abandon this novel, author-san.
I've never read a pokemon fanfic, but as I like the author's writing, I gave this one a chance, and I really liked it, I hope you don't stop updating.
Melhor fic de pokémon atualmente,continue com essa qualidade e por favor não abandone igual os outros autores,se possível seria incrível ver a jornada deles por todos os continentes,fora que tem como fazer ele vencer as ligas mas não se tornar o invencível até pq dava para ele perder para algumas elites 4 assim mantendo aquele nível de desafio sem precisar nerfar o protagonista
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i loved your other works so i hope this will become awesome as well as other works
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I’m loving this book. It’s very detailed and you actually have plot even tho there’s lemons. Always looking forward to the new chapters.
This fanfic is much better than Pokemon: Jordinio and Pokemon: An Unexpected Journey, changes my mind.
ok. i must say that as its really good. I read all the chapters in 4 days... The most surprising thing in this whole story is... um... The Goudere Joy and the segs! We need more detailed lemons. Like a whole chapter. People can skip it if they want and you can just write the short summary of any important thing told during it for the sensitive. Also, put tags in the novel or it wont show up in the list.
it's a good ff of pokemon I have a few issues with how the relationships developed with little to no build up but I liked a lot the last chapters. I hope you grow as a writer and keep letting the readers enjoy your work.PD: Please keep updating!
I really like this story, but because the reviews here are from your other story. This is Pokémon, not the one of the successor God, however it improves the rate of chapters that I can't wait for XD
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Ok, this is by far the best ‘adult’ Pokemon ff so far. I’m usually not a huge fan of harems, but it’s done very well here with the romance theme blending in well into the story. The characters are portrayed well. The story progression and writing quality are awesome. Definitely worth a read!
It's an amazing story, no doubt about it. A transmigration with harem subplot, with a good plot. Not many Pokemon stories can beat this in this genre.
Me encantó de principio a fin, bueno talvez hable desde mi adicción a este tipo de historias pero el mundo los tonos sus matices enserio seguire esperando semana a semana cada actualización
Amazing story A story about Ace Ketchum, a reincarnation, slowly building himself and dominating the Pokemon world. The characters and the interactions are amazing to read.
This is a fantastic Pokémon novel the story is great it has lots of twists and turns people you love and hate etc. Also, I feel like the Author does the romance and harem very well!
It's an amazing story, with good plot, world building, humour and OP moments. The protagonist(SI) is a older twin of Ash, on his journey to greatness.
Genial me encanta esta historia en especial como ya llegando a los últimos capítulos se vuelve bastante oscuro con todo lo del equipo rocket quiero mas capítulos !!
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This is the best Pokemon fanfiction I have ever read. although it only updates a few chapters a month, which is quite a shame in my opinion. but this is better than just one chapter every month, and the number of words in each chapter is also quite large, so in my opinion, the shortcomings of this fanfiction can be ignored. I hope you don't abandon this novel, author-san.
I've never read a pokemon fanfic, but as I like the author's writing, I gave this one a chance, and I really liked it, I hope you don't stop updating.
Melhor fic de pokémon atualmente,continue com essa qualidade e por favor não abandone igual os outros autores,se possível seria incrível ver a jornada deles por todos os continentes,fora que tem como fazer ele vencer as ligas mas não se tornar o invencível até pq dava para ele perder para algumas elites 4 assim mantendo aquele nível de desafio sem precisar nerfar o protagonista
Great story please keep making more[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]. And can you please try to make a digimon story I can't find any
i loved your other works so i hope this will become awesome as well as other works
Me encanta la trama,.................... .............,...,..........,...........................................,.................... .............,.............,...........................................,,,.................... .............,...,..........,...........................................,.................... .............,.............,...........................................,,
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I’m loving this book. It’s very detailed and you actually have plot even tho there’s lemons. Always looking forward to the new chapters.
This fanfic is much better than Pokemon: Jordinio and Pokemon: An Unexpected Journey, changes my mind.
ok. i must say that as its really good. I read all the chapters in 4 days... The most surprising thing in this whole story is... um... The Goudere Joy and the segs! We need more detailed lemons. Like a whole chapter. People can skip it if they want and you can just write the short summary of any important thing told during it for the sensitive. Also, put tags in the novel or it wont show up in the list.
it's a good ff of pokemon I have a few issues with how the relationships developed with little to no build up but I liked a lot the last chapters. I hope you grow as a writer and keep letting the readers enjoy your work.PD: Please keep updating!
I really like this story, but because the reviews here are from your other story. This is Pokémon, not the one of the successor God, however it improves the rate of chapters that I can't wait for XD
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This Pokemon fanfiction is one of best story written overall