The Glutton

LV 5

keijo

The story is enjoyable but has some issues. The biggest one for me is how slow the story is especially the first 20 chapters. I can understand that it is used to build the characters and world but for some reason it simply feels like extremely long prologue. The other problem is that there are levels but no mention how they affect personal strength e.g. how much stronger lvl 1 is to 0 or 10 to 9. This is especially annoying when MC has a dual class and as a reader I have no idea how it compares to normal single class. There is also huge lack of basic skills for other than mage class either none of the classes should have basic skills (meaning they have to learn themselves) or all should have at least some.

LV 5

Fallenherolux

this novel is very good please continue to post more chapters and please don't drop it. eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

LV 6

linFan

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LV 3

Project001

The story is good the characters are different from every other novels and the whole thing is a bit different and kinda original,,,,,great novel to sum it up

LV 3

Project001

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LV 4

Abeini

I give it a 5 stars rating because this novel is everything that i want from a novel. I have been reading novels for several years now and there's always one or two inconsistencies or just plain out infuriating moments in novels that grind my gears. In this novel i plan to get rid of any inconsistencies. However, i will not promise not putting in any infuriating instances. I believe that even those bits are part of the immersion of the overall story as they are capable of inciting such strong feelings in the reader. What i will promise though is no bitter after taste. I have always been a fan of humor in the writing's of other authors. I will do my utmost best to incorporate my own sense of humor into the story to hopefully alleviate the infuriating bits. Make the story go through serious transitions but also get a chuckle out of you... I hope you enjoy the read. Thank you.