3評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
與他人分享您的想法
寫檢討
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I love the potential it has laid out for us readers to get invested in such a masterpiece of a demo version of a story. But like all great fanfics that has a possibility of being greater than the original it has found its way into the Dropped/over-a-year-hiatus. All great fanfics never get finished or barely get started only to never conclude. Such a shame. Starting to wonder if I should stop reading them all together and read published novels instead. At least those have a higher rate of continuing.
Awesome story I was hoping for the system for marco diaz as the gamer abilities like magic and skills also knowledge of all beings who know about martial arts like mortal kombat all of them
Please continue [[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[
I love the potential it has laid out for us readers to get invested in such a masterpiece of a demo version of a story. But like all great fanfics that has a possibility of being greater than the original it has found its way into the Dropped/over-a-year-hiatus. All great fanfics never get finished or barely get started only to never conclude. Such a shame. Starting to wonder if I should stop reading them all together and read published novels instead. At least those have a higher rate of continuing.
Awesome story I was hoping for the system for marco diaz as the gamer abilities like magic and skills also knowledge of all beings who know about martial arts like mortal kombat all of them