摘要
Leon who drowned and died didn't sleep in nothingness but he dragged through time and space to find himself in a forest filled with ghosts. There was nothing aside from ghosts and corpses in the forest including himself. Without a body he could only look around and try to find out more about the place that he was in.
Learning the magic existed in this world and he could make a body from a ruins of a school. He made a body for himself but he wasn't a human anymore, he was a titan and he was inspired to become a magus who wield magic.
But the resources was finite in the world, only solution was to travel through the worlds and collect them to grow stronger and live longer.
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(Sorry for grammar mistakes and bad English. English isn't my native language and if you point out my mistakes, I'd gladly correct them. Thanks for Reading)
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Read the synopsis, that's all that needs to be said. If the author doesn't even respect their readers enough to edit the synopsis they shouldn't expect anyone to read their novel.
good potential and nice writing keep the good work thank you..............................................................................................
Great work,not your average stuff that make mc op rightaway but slowly...A brain type mc,not the kind that used talk no jutsu or plot armor type mc...From what I read until now,it got quite a future if it continue in this manner...
Of course I'll give five star to my novel Thanks for reading..............................................................................................
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I really like this book and it’s a great read and all but I just wish that it would update more often so that I could read more of it. Thank you for the great read
It feels like a bunch of books mashed together, as if the author can't decide what kind of book he wants to write The power system is confusing, sometimes I feel that the author wanted to create just a warrior but because it's too lame he choose to add the magus path, the problem is that he seems to forget that MC is also a magus. And until now the powers of a magus is way stronger compared to warrior type, making the MC kinda stupid since he mostly uses the physical means. Needs a better power system, on the way it's written you can't clearly see what kind of power MC has It has potential though
good going .. mc need women in life ....................................................................... .............................................................................................................................................................................................................................
卷 0 : Auxiliary Volume
卷 1
- 1 Prologue 5 years ago
- 2 Ruins of the School 5 years ago
- 3 Making A Body 5 years ago
- 4 Loren City 5 years ago
- 5 Visiting The Auction House 5 years ago
- 6 Job Proposal 5 years ago
- 7 Curing 5 years ago
- 8 The Auction 5 years ago
- 9 Count Titanheart 5 years ago
- 10 Mercenary Guild 5 years ago
- 11 Condensing The Heart 5 years ago
- 12 Choosing The Place 5 years ago
- 13 Arawn Academy 5 years ago
- 14 Book of Knowledge 5 years ago
- 15 Di Manes 5 years ago
- 16 Life is Fragile 5 years ago
- 17 Black Egg 5 years ago
- 18 Hermes 5 years ago
- 19 Portable Garden 5 years ago
- 20 Senior? 5 years ago
- 21 Anticlimactic Tournament 5 years ago
- 22 System World 5 years ago
- 23 Adventurers Guild 5 years ago
- 24 Merging 5 years ago
- 25 Hire me 5 years ago
- 26 Twilight Apple 5 years ago
- 27 Phoenix Blood 5 years ago
- 28 Yin-Yang Perfection 5 years ago
- 29 The Secret 5 years ago
- 30 Philosopher's Stone 5 years ago
- 31 Confrontation 5 years ago
- 32 Four Primordial Treasures 5 years ago
- 33 The Trials 5 years ago
- 34 Confusion 5 years ago
- 35 Gate City 5 years ago
- 36 First Trial 5 years ago
- 37 Interview 5 years ago
- 38 A Good Person 5 years ago
- 39 A Dwarf 5 years ago
- 40 Which End 5 years ago
- 41 Locke 5 years ago
- 42 The Mausoleum 5 years ago
- 43 Another One 5 years ago
- 44 Warmonger Totem 5 years ago
- 45 Training 5 years ago
- 46 West Front 5 years ago
- 47 The Camp 5 years ago
- 48 Becoming Adjutant 5 years ago
- 49 Asura Domain 5 years ago
- 50 Second Fight 5 years ago
- 51 Third Trial 5 years ago
- 52 Descents of the Gods 5 years ago
- 53 Second fight 5 years ago
- 54 Problem? 5 years ago
- 55 Second Dungeon 5 years ago
- 56 To the Ship 5 years ago
I have to admit that I really like the idea behind the story. Someone incorporial getting to sift through lots of information maybe fight some other ghosts for superior chaches of knowledge and having access to materials that would be considered super rare and useful for a body creation(that's the direction I would go for a few chapters). Certain parts do feel overly rushed and not "fleshed" out. My biggest hang up is the grammar. If the author wants to grab and keep a bigger audience then good or at least "not overly painful" grammar is an absolute must, because otherwise the pace and clarity of the reading keeps getting interrupted. Good luck author. Shoot me a message if you feel you have made enough changes for an update of my review. I would love to see what your story could turn into.
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