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IT WAS REALLY AMAZING...LOVED IT [◍•ᴗ•◍]♡ VERY GOOD ACCORDING TO UR FIRST ONE ◍◍◍◍◍◍◍◍◍◍◍◍◍◍◍◍◍◍◍◍◍◍◍◍ And Ya I fall for u lol>.<!! I RECOMMEND THIS TO MY FRIENDS TOO..
I loved the story line.... This ff was a perfect combination of fun😆, romance❤️ and smut🌚 over all I loved...and also I will definitely recommend this ff to my frds too.... I 💜 U
It was a very good story and it was fabulous. I don’t know what to say how this one-shot is make but it is awesome it’s a really amazing story. But some of the words are spelled wrong and the paragraphs were totally good so keep going mr/ms author your doing a great job at making this one-shot about Jimin. Jimin and y/n was a great character y/n was my favorite one because of her attitude and how cool she was jimin was just misunderstood and people should never judge a person by its cover well that’s it bye bye.
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Love this so much! Chim chim is my fav❤️💜❤️💜❤️💜❤️💜❤️💜❤️💜❤️💜❤️💜❤️💜❤️💜❤️💜❤️💜❤️💜❤️💜❤️💜❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️💜❤️💜❤️💜❤️❤️❤️💜❤️💜❤️💜❤️💜❤️❤️
Love it!! Chimchim is my fav!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!💜💜💜❤️❤️❤️💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜But let’s not forget about kookie ❤️❤️❤️💜💜💜💜💜💜💜❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
It is lit🔥👓👓👓👓👓👓👓👓👓👓👓👓😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😍😍😎😍😎😎😍😍😎😍😎😍😎😍😎😍😎😎😍😍😎😎😍😎😍😘😎😘😎😎😘😘😎😘😎😘😎😎😘😘😎😎😘😍😎😘😎😍😎😎😌😎😍😍😎😍😎😍😎😎😍😍😎😍😎😍😎😎😍😍😎😍😎😍😎😍😎😍😎😎😍😎😍😍😎😍😎😍😎😍😎😍😎😍😎😍😎😍😎😍😎😍😎😎😍😎😍😍😎😎😍😍😎😎😍😍😎😍😎😍😎😎😍😍😎😎😍😍😎😍😎😍😎😍😎😍😎😎😘😍😎😍😎😍😎😘😎😍😎😍😎😍😎😍😎😎😍😍😎😎😍😛😎😍😎😘😎😎😛😎😝
♥♥ ♥♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀 ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐ GOOD LUCK ⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ 🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀 ♥♥ ♥♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀 ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐ GOOD LUCK ⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ 🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀 ♥♥ ♥♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
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IT WAS AWESOME! LOVED IT A LOT! HOPE YOU MAKE MORE LIKE THIS! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️Lovelovelovelove Hehehehehehehehhehehehehehehehehehehehehehheehheheheh
Its really beautiful. I almost spend the rest of the day reading BTS FFs and etc. This app is so good. You will not get bored if you read some books in these app.
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Loved it …… the story was osm …. The characters, situations n all.… especially the ending
IT WAS REALLY AMAZING...LOVED IT [◍•ᴗ•◍]♡ VERY GOOD ACCORDING TO UR FIRST ONE ◍◍◍◍◍◍◍◍◍◍◍◍◍◍◍◍◍◍◍◍◍◍◍◍ And Ya I fall for u lol>.<!! I RECOMMEND THIS TO MY FRIENDS TOO..
I loved the story line.... This ff was a perfect combination of fun😆, romance❤️ and smut🌚 over all I loved...and also I will definitely recommend this ff to my frds too.... I 💜 U
It was a very good story and it was fabulous. I don’t know what to say how this one-shot is make but it is awesome it’s a really amazing story. But some of the words are spelled wrong and the paragraphs were totally good so keep going mr/ms author your doing a great job at making this one-shot about Jimin. Jimin and y/n was a great character y/n was my favorite one because of her attitude and how cool she was jimin was just misunderstood and people should never judge a person by its cover well that’s it bye bye.
揭示劇透 Love this so much! Chim chim is my fav❤️💜❤️💜❤️💜❤️💜❤️💜❤️💜❤️💜❤️💜❤️💜❤️💜❤️💜❤️💜❤️💜❤️💜❤️💜❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️💜❤️💜❤️💜❤️❤️❤️💜❤️💜❤️💜❤️💜❤️❤️
Love it!! Chimchim is my fav!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!💜💜💜❤️❤️❤️💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜But let’s not forget about kookie ❤️❤️❤️💜💜💜💜💜💜💜❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
It is lit🔥👓👓👓👓👓👓👓👓👓👓👓👓😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😍😍😎😍😎😎😍😍😎😍😎😍😎😍😎😍😎😎😍😍😎😎😍😎😍😘😎😘😎😎😘😘😎😘😎😘😎😎😘😘😎😎😘😍😎😘😎😍😎😎😌😎😍😍😎😍😎😍😎😎😍😍😎😍😎😍😎😎😍😍😎😍😎😍😎😍😎😍😎😎😍😎😍😍😎😍😎😍😎😍😎😍😎😍😎😍😎😍😎😍😎😍😎😎😍😎😍😍😎😎😍😍😎😎😍😍😎😍😎😍😎😎😍😍😎😎😍😍😎😍😎😍😎😍😎😍😎😎😘😍😎😍😎😍😎😘😎😍😎😍😎😍😎😍😎😎😍😍😎😎😍😛😎😍😎😘😎😎😛😎😝
♥♥ ♥♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀 ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐ GOOD LUCK ⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ 🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀 ♥♥ ♥♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀 ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐ GOOD LUCK ⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ 🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀 ♥♥ ♥♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
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IT WAS AWESOME! LOVED IT A LOT! HOPE YOU MAKE MORE LIKE THIS! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️Lovelovelovelove Hehehehehehehehhehehehehehehehehehehehehehheehheheheh
Its really beautiful. I almost spend the rest of the day reading BTS FFs and etc. This app is so good. You will not get bored if you read some books in these app.
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Loved it …… the story was osm …. The characters, situations n all.… especially the ending